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greytawnyowl [2009-08-27 20:46:22 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if you still go on DA but still... I've looked every single picture in your gallery (I don't remember how I ended up here though XD) and I must say that you improved a lot...
I don't really see a problem with proportions. You draw inverted triangle (or apple) figure, which is quite realistic since women who have this body shape tend to stock fat on they bust, belly and back... so it could explain the big breasts.
You obviously draw in anime style and make "caricature" of women and I don't have any problem with that, I like to exagerate curves too when I draw... I just tend to make them have big unrealistic hips instead of breasts XD.
So I'll just comment on this picture as someone else did : the neck seems quite thick but I actually think that's only because the shoulders and the arms are small compared with the rest of the body (especially the breasts). Perhaps you should try to draw wider -yet feminine- shoulders.
As for the arms, the only one that bothers me is the one on the left (I think it's on the left <---). It should be hidden behing the breast since they are so big... I mean, we shouldn't be able to see the elbow... or, it should be higher... I think the only real problem with it is perspective since we can't determine what pose she was supposed to take.
There is also too much space between the eyes (or they are too big) but she looks far more feminine than the other women you drew.
And I love her face, it's sweet and not provocative. It makes her more beautiful because she doesn't seem to be a flat character who's only there to look sexy.
The shading is perfect and I love the way you draw her breasts, they seem more realistic than the ball-like breasts people usually draw though we still see that they are caricature made to be sexy.
I think you should keep on drawing because you obviously have some talent.
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Master-Boob In reply to greytawnyowl [2009-09-05 14:45:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you much for this comment, indeed I am rarely on DA, cause I am drawing less than before. But I keep having a look at my comments regularly and I honestly still draw. I am just in some kind of giant art block, basically because I am lacking ideas, which are coming along with a few things you said - I just don't wanna draw sexy dolls in meaningless images, like you see them sooooo often. Even if I put the view on sexual details like breasts, I wanna draw changing poses and sceneries. I am lacking ideas for nice images, and I am kind of sick of drawing the same pinups all the time again. You got ideas?
For your critiques, they are good, I understand most of them, just a few little details are okay in my eyes, like her neck and shoulders. But this definately is everyone's personal view on things.
The thing with the left arm is damned right, today I see the thing too, that the arm looks quite small and should be hidden. Guess I tried a front stretched perspective and also guess... it's gone wrong XD
Also the eyes are... Kind of alright to me. Don't like them that way anymore, but I think the space is alright. But seriously, I am trying like hell to draw smaller yes, first because I wanna draw adult women, not young girls, and second because I dislike that classic anime-style with large eyes... Gotta train that.
The face is one detail you just got right. I don't wanna have my drawings have an appeal to the viewer like they wanna say "come here, I wanna have sex" cause it's just plain stupid. They should be sexy, and sometimes provocative, but not generally. That brings to the idea, that I should create a few recurring women, cause honestly, all the ones up to now are kind of random. That might also enable me to get better image ideas, like if you would imagine them in real life situations.
Yes, many artists here on DA have inspired me for this shading and style, and very few ones have given me inspiration of which methods to use. And yet another thing that proves that you are a good viewer - I really pay attention to how the breasts look. They seriously are unrealistic large, but I have an eye to draw them, like if they could be real. And if so, they have a lot of weight, and I pay attention that it keeps looking that way. I am just the same as you, that all those balloon-breasts look totally crappy. Unrealistic and just plain weird.
Well your comment kind of made my day, and I really feel like drawing right now again ^^ So thank you much, it's very rare that I get meaningful comments. Could be because I chose a genre where people don't tend to be philosophic :b
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Romaniman [2009-03-05 00:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Nice shading and highlighting. Keep it up.
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Romaniman In reply to Romaniman [2009-03-05 01:04:17 +0000 UTC]
You may want to work on your proportions, though. Neck is somewhat thick for anime (which, actually, is quite refreshing to see.) and the arms seem a touch too short. In general, the upper arm reaches to the bellybutton at the elbow, and the forearm is about the same length without the hands. Also, the ear seems a little high, and the eye farthest from the audience doesn't seem deformed enough.
Even with all that said, very good job on the flow of fabric and the softness of her flesh at her underwear. I look forward to your next work. ^_^
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EchoWing [2009-01-04 18:04:08 +0000 UTC]
You've definitely progressed as an artist. Nice work.
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Master-Boob In reply to EchoWing [2009-01-04 23:35:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks much, I like the image much too ^^
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Master-Boob In reply to Jumper9999 [2009-01-04 23:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Ja, er lebt noch - zum GlΓΌck! Zwar bin ich unsicher, wie viel ich in Zukunft noch zeichnen kΓΆnnen werde, aber ich versuche es ein wenig stabiler zu halten als bisher. Das Bild hat wieder sehr viel SpaΓ gemacht ^^
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TenkiShonen [2009-01-04 17:22:57 +0000 UTC]
Glad to see this isn't a dead account, I was starting to wonder. If you're trying for more feminine faces, you could, at least comparing to this once, squish the face a tad, at first glance it looks a tad long to me.
Brilliant shading and detailing tho. :3
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Master-Boob In reply to TenkiShonen [2009-01-04 23:43:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you much ^^ Yes I have always considered this would be a working method. I was easily used to draw female faces some time ago, never had problems - now it has changed a bit, but I'll get it done again ^___^
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TenkiShonen In reply to Master-Boob [2009-01-04 23:47:50 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure you will. A little time and some practice and you'll be back in great shape I'm sure.
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Master-Boob In reply to TenkiShonen [2009-01-04 23:52:06 +0000 UTC]
I think so. Hmmm.... I am somewhat motivated just to get started on another image right now :b I should do XD
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TenkiShonen In reply to Master-Boob [2009-01-05 00:11:43 +0000 UTC]
If you're motivated, then yep, go with it! Come back with a vengeance!
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Master-Boob In reply to TenkiShonen [2009-01-05 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]
I would be thinking about a rather complex booby image. Mostly, images which are basically playing around overdone sexy girls are cheap ones, but I would like to do a very nice one. Also having entire background and the like. But if I do, there have to be several girls so that it would be worth it XD
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TenkiShonen In reply to Master-Boob [2009-01-05 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]
>.< Oi, complex images are something I haven't figured out just yet. I've got some planned I want to do later however. I certainly have quite a few busty girls on my page to work with.
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RakaiThwei [2009-01-04 16:17:38 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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Master-Boob In reply to GIJohn [2009-01-04 23:48:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow, nice that it looks 3-dimensional to you. I like the shading of the shirt too, it's always a somewhat hard task for me - look at this [link] image, there I totally messed up the shirt shadow. Well actually, my friend of digital designs, Mc-B messed it up, but also just after my traditional drawing. However, I think my style improved, especially with the shading and details.
It was actually not a bit hard all to do, I enjoy shading. It goes like on it's own, traditional shading is very lovely. I have had the mastered linework of this, and the entire shading (means everything which was done by grey pens) was done within a TV-evening. I was quite surprised too, but I guess my drawing speed increased. Good to know, and probably there will grow more images out of that ^^
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GIJohn In reply to Master-Boob [2009-01-04 23:58:41 +0000 UTC]
First off, thanks for the detailed, dare I say epic, reply... never used to such volume
Looking at the linked image, it's not so bad, everything seems to be in the right place, but I think this new image, the shading fits as it's a monochrome picture rather than colour. You have all the right levels of shading in the right areas
Hope to see more from you of course, and increased speed will help that, just don't sacrifice quality to get something done quicker
And out of curiosity, Mc-B tidies up your drawings digitally?, just wondering how much you both do... should I praise him as well?
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Master-Boob In reply to GIJohn [2009-01-05 01:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I'd never rush a "good" image to get it done quickly XD Sometimes an images doesn't come out as good as I wanted it, then sometimes I rush it to an end to get one somewhat finished result, not to waste the time I spent on it.
Mc-B is a very good - probably the best - friend of me. Few years ago, he found out what I like to draw. And since he's a man too, he was quite excited about it actually :b And since he's the master of all computer stuff, sometimes he puts his hand on my images and re-creates them in a digital way. But like always, he scans and optimizes the traditonal images for me, since I am not the much of a computer nerd XD I love my pencil, the fineliner and numerous greyscale felt-pens, and I like to worth with nothing but those. Very often people tell me I should use copics. But I dislike. I am a clear supporter of classic felt pens
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