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As always you have created another stunning work of art.
I have noticed that you are able to maintain great consistency in your works. The quality of the line and perspective is unreal. It is a little blurry towards the bottom, which to me looks intentional for the sake of perspective. But it does not negatively impact the art work.
The dress is extremely detailed eventhough it does not have a print, when the belt does. Other subtleties like her tears are black yet she has these beautiful white wings. And although they are quite contradictory you do not question he innocence. Which mind you can be terribly difficult at times.
You have chosen complementary sets of colors though subtle pull everything together.
Also, this has very good presence to it and when you look at it you can tell this was done by masterbimo but it does so subtly.
So congratulations for being able to pull it off, smashingly good job.
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Your talent is stunning, so let's start off with that. I don't know the intent of the game, the age group, or story-line, but I always enjoy seeing what you come up with next. This piece has an interesting play on light and dark, of course drawing the focal point to an innocent face and the black tear.
The palette is rich and engaging - the feathers, fabric, hair and skin textures are all well executed and blended into balanced composition that captured my attention.
There are a couple things that threw me, however, and prompted me to take you up on the critique. "Black Rain" and "Angel" both leave a lot fo room for interpretation, so I apologize if we disagree... but she comes up short on black rain for me...she is too much an angel. I appreciate the subtle treatment on her hands, but I somehow would want to see more blackness, if not in her face (which is so well put together), then in her clothing or on her arms and hands maybe? Hard to say.
Another thing that bothers me is her hands in general. As the focus of the composition drifts away from her face it goes more out of focus - a very nice effect; however, for some reason the hands look more like a layered vector drawing where the rest of the piece looks like a painting. They seem, if only mildly, out of place for such a deep and submursive image.
I like the fact that her hair is NOT black - a fun twist on the concept, so kudos there.
I hope this feedback proves useful. Again, this critique is a perception not a judgment. If you change nothing, this piece is still amazing.
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Found it on Ufunk
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Use it for illustrate my short story there :
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if you don't mind of course
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~Oumashu is claiming that you've given him this artwork [link]
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This is beautiful! I love it!
I really like how you did her hair too. Quite impressive.
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amazing work bro your like my fav artist here on DA!!!
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This is so cool! Good job! I'm not really much of an artist, so I cant really critique it well, But I think it looks amzing.
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I really love this piece! The expression is great, and the shading/colouring is spot on. ^^
First, I really like the hair. The numerous strands that don't just move in one direction make the hair look more realistic. The hands are also well done. The blackish lines on the hands make her look like she's got some kind of issue or blood poisoning, though. If that's the 'black rain' from in the title, then there should be more of it on her arms, body, and clothes, not just on her hands. I can see that there's some on the arms and clothes, but the blood would run down the top part of the arm as well, and not just off to the sides. The expression on her face is one of my favourite parts. Her eyes look sad from the black tears, and the mouth looks mostly indifferent. I say mostly because the corners of her lips look as though they're just raised, like there's a ghost of a smile on her face. I do like it. ^^ Overall, this piece is beautiful- I love the colours and the clothing textures. Keep up the amazing work!
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she looks as if she's saying, "what have i done to you?".. pretty girl..
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I have never played a trading card game, but if the art looks like this I might have to start.
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wow if only i could be as gud!!! lol amazing job
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this is absolutely amazing!! you never cease to astonish me......how you do it is beyond me.
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A bit too blurry in some places making it seem awkward. Also the contrast and lighting on her face is a bit too strong to match up with the hair and eyes. Other than that it looks nice.
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I really love your art work! your very good at it.
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This is just plain amazing! The coloring is flat out beautiful
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