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Kergonan [2018-09-02 11:24:03 +0000 UTC]

A fine ending for this chapter, but I'll miss these two lovebirds.

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masterreviewer1000 [2018-09-02 01:33:32 +0000 UTC]

The end of a chapter and the start of a new beginning! Personally, I say this chapter as a whole was more of a mix-bag that leans so close to this not being very good. It had a good and interesting beginning that showed the main conflict of the story that got me very excited and wanting to see more of what it had to offer. Then the middle of the chapter (Evil Reiko part) started to feel like it was dragging on for WAY longer than it needed to be, had way too many filler nonsense, like unneeded jokes that killed the pacing, weird cuts in between fights, and unbalanced fight choreography with the punches not look like they had any impact and the weird positions each fighter would be, for example when Evil Reiko kicked Kyoko after tricking her that kept taking me out of the plot. I know that having a more action-packed setting wasn’t the main focus of the entire chapter as you wanted to flesh out characters that needed to be expanded more is a really good goal to be having, but there’s still action involved and it felt like it wasn’t thought out enough, you see the problem in them, or you focused too much on improving Issy, Reiko and Skye that you didn’t put too much focus on the other parts of the story like the middle to make the story stronger. Evil Reiko for the most part was a really good villain to have…. (at first). The build up of her was done well enough with Reiko being pushed by Issy far enough to turn into Evil Reiko and she was entertaining with a plan for her to take over Reiko’s physical body while beating the crap out of her and having pretty good jokes. Sadly, that’s all she had to offer as all she was was just an entity that attacked anyone that was either in her range of vision while mostly just being “LOL I’m evil. Let see how much jokes, references and memes that I can spout out of my mouth.” You would think that after all this time Evil Reiko would do whatever in her power to try and not give the heroes the chance to re-seal her again, but nope! Do whatever you want and act like nothing can stop you even though YES THERE FUCKING IS! It was like watching Android 21, but she was more of a threat and had more focus on what she wanted to do than what Evil Reiko can ever show. Android 21’s plan was to create evil clones of the main fighters and/or turn them into candy to get stronger, and she had a weird food fetish. If it wasn’t for the the ending parts of this story I would have found this a  disappointing chapter to read through. From when Reiko went to Skye’s place to the talk at the end I actually liked very much. It saved the chapter as a whole of what I was reading. Reiko talking to Quick and Skye was nicely handled, meeting Issy’s adopted family was a treat to read through and a great change of pace, Issy reading the letter that was given to her by her birth parents was sweet and touching, and the ending to the chapter left a pretty good hopeful feeling for the future. Wish I didn’t suffered getting there, but you get what you get I guess.

This chapter was like me watching "The Goku Black arc" from Dragon Ball Super. It had good beginning with the villain/problem being interesting to look forward to, the middle made the story weak, had crap I didn’t like, and stopped me from caring overall, and the ending didn’t save it, but it was a great way to tie up the story in hope for the future for the characters. I don’t think I will ever come back to this chapter ever again after this because parts of the chapter left a bad taste in my mouth. Hopefully the next chapter Mastergodai makes will leave a better impression than what I felt about this entire chapter.

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MrAMP [2018-08-31 20:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Something tells me that next semester is going to be quite sexy.

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Wolfdrums19 [2018-08-31 14:47:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually looking forward to seeing how Quick handles things with Chrissy and the girls, give or take it's kind of implied Chrissy and Jazmine have an eye for him. It's an interesting relationship triangle where honestly I can see it going into a harem of sorts.

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NeoNimbus526 [2018-08-31 13:51:40 +0000 UTC]

That sure was a nice way to end that chapter.

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king4ever35 [2018-08-31 04:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Google Chrome doesn't seem to let me open the link, it just says that it's invalid.

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Darkwings45 [2018-08-31 04:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh God, I'm not sure how the series will last without Reiko's crazy, perverted shenanigans if she's gonna be in Japan!

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DeadCobra [2018-08-31 04:04:52 +0000 UTC]

This is funny

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