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mastermayhem ā€” Louisiana Staircase

Published: 2012-02-04 21:18:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description A section of the staircase that connects both ends of Louisiana st in Beechview, near Pittsburgh, Pa
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aBallofWin [2012-02-04 21:28:13 +0000 UTC]

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I love this photo, it's really errie and the angle you took it from is great; it wouldn't be the same effect if you'd taken it straight on! It's great that it's colourless, and that you can't see the end of the stairs, it gives it a feel as if you're totally alone, and wouldn't be out of place in a game/film like silent hill or resident evil e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

As for an improvement, i really can't think of one! You've defintively got the best shot for this photo and i congratulate you on it!

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Jake

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mastermayhem In reply to aBallofWin [2012-02-04 22:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the crit! It is a lot more than my work usually sees comment or crit wise. I appreciate hearing from people WHAT they like or done and WHY they like or don't like something. Anything beyond "Nice work" is welcomed.

I do like that you can't see the end of the stairs due to the atmospheric perspective and weather. The angle was my first choice. I'm happy to hear that it is working!

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aBallofWin In reply to mastermayhem [2012-02-04 23:26:21 +0000 UTC]

No worries Keep to it, you're very talented

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