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Published: 2019-04-18 20:26:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 377; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a revamp of my OC Jay-7 ^^ Hope you like!
The background is very VERY lazy rip


Commissions: 
www.deviantart.com/peachiebun/…




Art: peachiebun     Characters: peachiebun    
!DO NOT USE, COPY, RESELL OR REPOST MY ART WITHOUT MY PERMISSION! 
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Comments: 25

Unialien [2019-11-18 23:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! So gorgeous your character! (★^O^★)

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matchabuns In reply to Unialien [2019-11-19 19:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much ^^

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Unialien In reply to matchabuns [2019-11-19 21:36:35 +0000 UTC]

It is a pleasure!

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TheArtKyutie [2019-05-14 23:51:50 +0000 UTC]

UwU So much improvement! The color palette and background is truly amazing! The whole art is masterpiece, Miss Peachie! 

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matchabuns In reply to TheArtKyutie [2019-05-16 19:38:05 +0000 UTC]

thankyou so much ;w;

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mariam246810 [2019-04-26 19:41:20 +0000 UTC]

the colors are amazing 

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matchabuns In reply to mariam246810 [2019-04-27 09:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much ^^

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NewHorizontStudio [2019-04-21 17:24:07 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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matchabuns In reply to NewHorizontStudio [2019-04-23 09:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou c:

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Natheart17 [2019-04-21 12:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I came from project comment.

 

I like the art you’ve made. I was scrolling down just a bit on the submission page. I’ve found your art interesting so I checked it out decide to give my insights about it. There were few arts the caught my eye and this one is one of them. The color palette is well chosen. It gives more cool feeling to it because of the blue color and its neighboring colors. You are already good at forms and keeping your character the central of your art. Btw the design of the character is cool fitting with its anime style art.

As for your bg…    hmmmm….. It’s still worth saying it’s still not out of place and still looks good. The feeling still keeps bothering me that it needs more some work. The cloudy gases at the sky could be made more glowy as you could observe from realistic ones. Its irregular shapes can be improved too. The colors you used for those can be still kept. You can go crazy or go beyond with whatever brush you used with that. The star constellations are done good too. Some just look like beans. I also noticed there was a black part on her right ponytail(idk) which I’m not clear about.

 


Anyways, it is a nice art. I am also guilty when becoming lazy on the latter that’s why I tend to continue them on other times. I’ll hope you’ll continue doing the good work minus the lazy tendencies XD. Good job and thank you.   

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matchabuns In reply to Natheart17 [2019-04-23 10:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for your feedback! ;w;
I'm glad you liked my character, I think since I focus more on that and then get lazy with backgrounds they tend to look better than the background OTL 
I'll try and use your advice next time I do a bg like this ^^

Thanks again c: 

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Maralene [2019-04-21 02:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Very well done!!! I love the colors chosen for the space in the background, love the color of the hair that goes very well with the background colors. Love the reflection lighting on the dress front. 

GREAT JOB!!

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matchabuns In reply to Maralene [2019-04-21 10:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^^
I think I could improve on the background but I gave up on it riiiip TvT

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Maralene In reply to matchabuns [2019-04-21 12:07:15 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!!

We all are our worst critics... I am glad you submitted what you had.. maybe later on you can work on what you think you would like to improve and resubmit -- I know others do that..

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plantgem [2019-04-20 23:16:36 +0000 UTC]

love the color palette

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matchabuns In reply to plantgem [2019-04-21 10:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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plantgem In reply to plantgem [2019-04-20 23:17:08 +0000 UTC]

i'm also from ProjectComment i'm just not as eloquent as FrostSh0ck today xD

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theBluYu In reply to plantgem [2019-04-21 00:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Lmao

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theBluYu [2019-04-20 23:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Hey there. I'm here from Project Comment.

I'll start off my evaluation with what I think you're doing good at so far. You clearly have some experience when it comes to anime-style art. The face, hair, anatomy are all very 'anime.' Your shading is clean, and you make good use of light as well. Now, for the things that you could improve, the first thing that I noticed in this piece was the background. It doesn't really match with the clean, detailed drawing style of the character. I'd say you should probably take a little more time on your clouds and stars, next time. That, or you could get some more brushes. Next, there's the lighting of the skin. Some parts of the character's skin appear a bit shinier than they should be (at least in her environment). Highlights are good, but always remember that the background should affect the lighting as well. The last few things I have to say aren't exactly things that you are doing wrong, but rather tips on how you can continue to improve and develop in general. Try to limit using or showing too much line-art. This can make your pieces look much more natural. It's still okay to use line-art while drawing the base of the painting, but see if you can work your way up to not having to rely on line-art eventually. Additionally, try adding more texture to your paintings. Even in anime-style artwork, having a little more detail and texture is always good, and can make the piece more interesting to look at. The next thing might just be me, but the character's lips look a little strange to me. You'll have to look into that on your own since I have no idea why they look weird. Apart from that, everything looks mostly fine. Maybe you could make your faces a bit pointer, but that's more of a style thing. Different animes have different styles. Either way, I hope this helped.

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matchabuns In reply to theBluYu [2019-04-21 10:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much for your comment! ^^
I'll try and use your advice about for my next artwork ^^
( Although I'm not going to lie, I kinda gave up at the background ahahaaaa   )
I think the lips may be a style thing because some of the artists that I look to for inspiration draw them like that  

Anyways, thankyou so much! This feedback is super detailed and I really appreciate it

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Ryonosuke00 [2019-04-20 23:04:21 +0000 UTC]

I like 

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matchabuns In reply to Ryonosuke00 [2019-04-21 10:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you c:

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Ryonosuke00 In reply to matchabuns [2019-04-21 23:52:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome
 

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bardi98 [2019-04-18 21:57:38 +0000 UTC]

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matchabuns In reply to bardi98 [2019-04-19 20:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much ;w;

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