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O-ssyan [2018-02-26 13:10:52 +0000 UTC]
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Hi! I've arrived to this piece of architectural wonder via projectcomment.deviantart.com/ , and since obviously you've already received praise for the care & craft put into this, I'll try to focus on the thing I really apreciate here, how you've managed to make this original.
This not only includes all the possible homages to classical illusional figures and paradoxes, but also manages to twist some references, which I really appreciate. The warped archs/stairs connecting the central towers, for exaple really got me guessing what they actually where, just as the balcony-bridge on the second tower and hogarth's fisherman on the roof.
However, I believe clarity here came at the expense of keeping things undramatical (is that a word? oh well) with just volumetric shading and lots of blank windows to the right, and the axial building being, well, a regular one. That's why I think most of escher's buildings are assimetrical constructions.
I truly believe this is good as it is, but that Impact scale might benefit for a more...piranesian spirit, I guess? some intense shadowing can turn some key focal points even more ambiguous and hide some important "lackings". Anyways this is amazing, and you, my friend, deserve a watch. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title=" (Smile)"/>
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BrendanRizzo [2018-02-25 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]
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Hello. I have come from a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p⦠" alt=" " title="ProjectComment" />, and when I saw this in the gallery folder, I knew I had to comment on it.
I am amazed by how great this looks. The lines are perfectly straight, and give the piece the same feel as the illustrations in older books, (including, considering the Escher theme, books on geometry and optical illusions) and the line art is great, with you knowing how to use as few quick lines as possible to give the illusion of depth efficiently, without messing up the style or forms. I am sure that you must have been meticulous in your attention to detail, and therefore the viewer should will have to look long and hard to fully appreciate this. Considering that themost worthy comparisons to Escher are the result of the geometrically impossible figures, such as the storeys and buttresses, and the cube hanging from the hook up top, your patience, in order to ensure that the lines are perfectly straight and proportionate, is incredible. The slightest error would have ruined the effect, but I cannot really perceive anything wrong with this. You must understand geometry a lot, as you were able to draw the contradictory planes and contours without getting confused and disoriented. Just for the meticulousness alone, I have to rate this as one of the best artworks Iβve ever seen on this website.
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Rejuv1n8edChr0nic9l In reply to MatejCadil [2018-02-21 17:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Understandable, but still it might actually add to the optical illusion and impossible construction. Though I am fine with this.
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GDupons [2019-12-29 01:59:05 +0000 UTC]
What a nice and well executed tribute to one of the greatest graphic artist of the 20th century!
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Toucam [2018-07-03 17:31:31 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely amazing! As someone who likes creating mathematical art, I really appreciate the effort and vision put into this piece.
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MatejCadil In reply to Toucam [2018-07-18 17:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I really enjoyed drawing this, though it took a lot of time.
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TheMentaleseFalcon [2018-03-13 05:34:55 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the best executed tributes to Escher's ideas I've seen.
It has just the right amount of detail to sell the illustration and right amount of complexity to fascinate with the impossible.
As critique, the lower stories (pillars) could have been just a little taller so that the little people could not 'reach out with their hands and touch the impossible'. I think part of the impossible constructions fun is the mental journey on the path, like the ant on the mobius strip, if you follow what I mean. (if they can touch the impossible, they don't need to make the journey.)
well done!
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MatejCadil In reply to TheMentaleseFalcon [2018-03-20 22:14:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your comment and thoughtful critique.
I agree with you, perhaps the problem is that I wanted to put too many parts and objects in a limited space, so they are often too close together β more space could certainly benefit them.
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mbinz [2018-03-04 18:41:02 +0000 UTC]
great perspective! `Β¬)
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kuro-mono [2018-02-24 06:16:00 +0000 UTC]
Such a clean and intricately drawn piece. I personally love architectural art (though I'm very bad at executing them) and while I have been too familiar with the optical illusion tricks, I find your work very refreshing because it really TRICKED me at first, thinking "Oh this is such a nice, symmetrical structure" but as I looked closer I started to see that it isn't a normal castleΒ Β It's very nice how you have created a bit of varieties for different parts of the castles but still made it look so well-balanced. I also love the fact that you've added people doing various jobs inside and outside the castle, it gives a sense of the normal everyday life which contradicts the surreal quality of the structure, and I guess it would have been boring without the interaction of tiny humans so good job!!!!
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MarkNoyArt [2018-02-21 20:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! This must have taken a lot of planning.
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DarkMatterExia00 [2018-02-21 14:03:13 +0000 UTC]
I can tell that this took you hours to complete. I love the attention to detail and how it incorporates 3D. This is a great piece of art.
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Liswyn [2018-02-21 13:08:11 +0000 UTC]
It is so clean and intricate, one could confuse it with a real project until they found out the arches don't really connect to the "right columns". You did an awesome job here, the image is very well centered and the elements are all well balanced. Even being a mostly-lineart work, the simple shading and the addition of the details on the roofs, towers, ladders and stairs made the whole piece gain quite a depth. I just love how this is so straight-lined and at the same time completely surreal. Definitely caught my eye. Congratulations!!
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MatejCadil In reply to Liswyn [2018-02-23 09:15:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for your comment! I had a lot of fun devising it, though of course it had to be well planned. π
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theJfluffy [2018-02-21 06:30:18 +0000 UTC]
This is truly AMAZING!
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SlapdashWorkshop [2018-02-21 04:19:03 +0000 UTC]
This is messing with my head I love it XD
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MensjeDeZeemeermin [2018-02-20 22:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Such a tremendous amount of careful, intricate labor, you've put so much time into this. It's very striking.
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