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Birthday request for which was OCt 15th (late completion)

Request:
the very first page of my OC story. I would like very much to see what it looks like drawn out.
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I drew out a single page based on this text:
Orion had finally returned. The 23 year old man, with medium-shaggy jet black hair and blue eyes, had unpacked his things at his apartment and looked around as he put on a black muscle shirt and clean jeans. Everything seemed to have been cleaned. There wasn't any dust like he expected. He assumed someone had kept it clean for him. But it had been three whole years since he had left. He hadn't seen anyone on his way to his apartment, and he was sure no one had seen him on his way either. But his trail of thought was interrupted by his front door opening. He peeked around the corner of his room to see who it was. He wanted to prepare himself for a fight, but didn't have the energy for a head on assault. He would have to make a surprise attack to have the advantage.
He finally caught a glimpse of the intruder, who to his surprise was Selene. The girl who he had spent his childhood years with, had grown into a very beautiful woman, who was now 22 years old. Because of her family going through hardships before he had left, it had been almost 4 years since he had seen her. They had talked through letters in the mail, but rarely could they get the letters back and forth fast enough. Her cleavage length black hair was like he remembered. But she was no longer the girl he knew. Her chest had developed nicely, into what he guessed to be something of the C size. The orange belly shirt made it easier to guess. Her hips had formed nicely as well, not big like some women. But it was still noticeably different thanks to the usual jeans females wear. Her figure was unlike anything he had ever seen. She was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen.
He wanted so badly to talk to her. But he had to get out of his apartment without being seen.

Full story Elements of Life:A drink alone Orion had finally returned. The 23 year old man, with medium-shaggy jet black hair and blue eyes, had unpacked his things at his apartment and looked around as he put on a black muscle shirt and clean jeans. Everything seemed to have been cleaned. There wasn't any dust like he expected. He assumed someone had kept it clean for him. But it had been three whole years since he had left. He hadn't seen anyone on his way to his apartment, and he was sure no one had seen him on his way either. But his trail of thought was interrupted by his front door opening. He peeked around the corner of his

Description
Birthday request for which was OCt 15th (late completion)

Request:
the very first page of my OC story. I would like very much to see what it looks like drawn out.
[link]

I drew out a single page based on this text:
Orion had finally returned. The 23 year old man, with medium-shaggy jet black hair and blue eyes, had unpacked his things at his apartment and looked around as he put on a black muscle shirt and clean jeans. Everything seemed to have been cleaned. There wasn't any dust like he expected. He assumed someone had kept it clean for him. But it had been three whole years since he had left. He hadn't seen anyone on his way to his apartment, and he was sure no one had seen him on his way either. But his trail of thought was interrupted by his front door opening. He peeked around the corner of his room to see who it was. He wanted to prepare himself for a fight, but didn't have the energy for a head on assault. He would have to make a surprise attack to have the advantage.
He finally caught a glimpse of the intruder, who to his surprise was Selene. The girl who he had spent his childhood years with, had grown into a very beautiful woman, who was now 22 years old. Because of her family going through hardships before he had left, it had been almost 4 years since he had seen her. They had talked through letters in the mail, but rarely could they get the letters back and forth fast enough. Her cleavage length black hair was like he remembered. But she was no longer the girl he knew. Her chest had developed nicely, into what he guessed to be something of the C size. The orange belly shirt made it easier to guess. Her hips had formed nicely as well, not big like some women. But it was still noticeably different thanks to the usual jeans females wear. Her figure was unlike anything he had ever seen. She was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen.
He wanted so badly to talk to her. But he had to get out of his apartment without being seen.

Full story Elements of Life:A drink alone Orion had finally returned. The 23 year old man, with medium-shaggy jet black hair and blue eyes, had unpacked his things at his apartment and looked around as he put on a black muscle shirt and clean jeans. Everything seemed to have been cleaned. There wasn't any dust like he expected. He assumed someone had kept it clean for him. But it had been three whole years since he had left. He hadn't seen anyone on his way to his apartment, and he was sure no one had seen him on his way either. But his trail of thought was interrupted by his front door opening. He peeked around the corner of his