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- Every morning I wait for this moment. Since I started to like girls I see this older girl at the bus stop.
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I'd like to know what do you think about a story with one panel and text telling the course of the events like a book ?
Lemme know.
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No prob!
All the best,
Chris
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Its always an interesting idea to help flesh out the image so the viewer is more aware to what is happening.
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And that is the most important thing. ^_^
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But the story needs to be longer than I wrote.. XD
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There will be more panels, I said about the text below them, I meant...it's very short and poor.
And correct the English, off course. Any grammar mistake note me ! Β
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Sometimes short and sweet is good.
Will do. ^_^
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But I try longer text soon.
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