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Published: 2012-12-08 23:49:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 435; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 4
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Description My English is bad, so ple-ease tell me if you find mistakes.
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88Elena88 [2012-12-09 12:30:44 +0000 UTC]

"did he refuse", а не "did he refused". И лучше не "what did I do wrong", а "what have I done wrong". Вроде других ошибок нет.

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Mayegalkarven In reply to 88Elena88 [2012-12-09 15:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Спасибо за помощь.

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