Comments: 7
Cocatrola [2013-06-08 01:19:16 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Wow I believe I haven't commented on any of your art yet, new brosauce?
First off, this artwork is AMAZING!!! I absolutely love the proportion and effects! CRAP sketch? What the heck are you talking about? Lies! Also, the character design and expression add so much dynamism to this picture! This picture deserves WAAAAY more than four comments, I tell ya. Forgive me for being extremely terrible at describing exactly how awesome I think (and feel) this artwork is, but I'll try my best to write a half-decent critique!
VISION: The boy is clearly performing an alchemical move. Coupled with a dynamic pose and awesome green effects, I have a clear vision that he must be a real badass!
Originality: I feel like this piece is original because most other manga pictures I see look quite dead. However, this picture feels alive and has a soul of its own! That speaks miles of originality for me!
Technique: Again, this picture is pure awesomeness in visual form. I love the amazing soft shading, effects, and dynamic anime style.
Impact: In your gallery, this was definitely one of the pieces that stood out most to me due to the action pose and expression. I can feel an adrenaline rush coming on. I can almost envision the boy's right fist coming out and sending a an alchemical spell right at me! Oh noes!
All in all, have I said enough? I don't even know what to say now but...
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
AWESOMESAUCENESS!!! *BROFIST*
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longestdistance [2014-09-06 02:33:05 +0000 UTC]
Ooo nice :3 Loving that dynamic pose!
For the shading, I think maybe the contrast is just SLIGHTLY too extreme. I feel like that level of darkness (esp the shading in the middle of the yellow clothing) could be saved for the lil nooks and crannies, kinda like where that ribbon is.
I think also your lineart is too thin, everything kinda blends together and I think it might help to make it more noticeable? :3 I'm mostly referring to the hair and ears, I feel it could use some more definition.
It looks awesome and you have lovely coloring skills! Nice graphic design too~
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MayomiCCz In reply to longestdistance [2014-09-07 00:24:33 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, that's what it is.
I will be careful with the not adding too much
contrast next time and pay more attention to light
source, light and dark values where they are needed and unneeded~
I really appreciate this very much ;w;
I think your colouring is phenomenal so I appreciate
the critique on this ;w;
Thank you very much!~
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DeadCobra [2013-05-06 12:41:17 +0000 UTC]
Very great
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CeeDee23 [2013-05-06 03:04:44 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome!!! The pose is so powerful.
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MayomiCCz In reply to CeeDee23 [2013-05-07 01:07:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much!
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