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Published: 2010-10-14 03:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 7834; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 105
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PART 10 [link] PART 12 [link] VERSION ENGNICKTOONS RETURN OF THE TOYBOTS
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You need English lessons. I like this comic, but your translation really seems off. :/
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I know, but as I said, I have no adviser to help me with the humorous style in its version, and until I can not find one, the English version is in pause.
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I understand. I hope you will be able to find someone who will help you out with the English version of the comic. I wish I could help, but I don't know Spanish.
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The of the sentences seem a bit out of place in the comic, otherwise it',s great!!
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Danny: Oh come on, Jimmy!
Danny: Come on, come on...Jimmy! it´s me, Danny Phantom
Jimmy: Here Jimmy, i´m glad to see you fine, Danny, I thought they captured you
Danny: i see you either, tell me, Is Jimmy, Bob, Timmy and Tak with you?
Jimmy: they doesn´t have luck, they captured almost all
Danny: Oh, i see, it seems like there´s just you and me
Jimmy: No Danny, unfortunately i'll be captured soon, but there's still survivors
Jimmy: I need you to find them. They are Zim, Manny and XJ9. I´ll send you too my dimensional carrier box, there is our robots costumes that we used the last time, and i created more for our friends, and your communicator will open a portail.
Danny: Ok Jimmy, but, Is Professor Calamitus behind you?
Jimmy: No, it´s a new villian that i doesn´t...
Danny: Neutron!!
Danny: Oh no....You didn´t come to say hello, right? I see no...
Danny: Well, i hope this works
Danny: Here i go!
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The translation switched to German in the last three panels. You need to fix that.
Other than the translation problem, it's really good!
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thanks for telling me, now I correct
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