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Published: 2012-01-12 21:33:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1104; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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MODEL: MelissaLOCATION: Ulm, GERMANY
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Comments: 4
A wonderfully shot and created piece. The title explains everything, since the model's expression is perfect. The pose is also perfect. The colours I love aswell, the bright blue shoes and navy blue outside of the jacket with the natural colours of the trousers, t-shirt and lining of the jacket go so well together and give this piece the ability to stand out more. I am also glad that there is no background save the gradient of white. I often prefer a background in photo's but I believe this is so delicate and beautiful that giving it a background would ruin it. I am confused as to why this piece has so little comments since it's so simple and fantastic. I apoligise now if this critique is bland or simple in language, it's my first critique and I'm glad I decided to critique such a wonderful piece.
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I'd like to thank you very much for your critique! I just wished you'd tell me something I could have done better 
Calvin x
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What a neat photo! First thing I want to say, is that I find it strange and kinda unfair that this photo has so little feedback. The model is very beautiful, her clothes and make-up just right for a photo like this. But what I like the most is her pose and facial expression.
You made the right choice, putting this image under the "Expressive" category and choosing that title. Not only has she a perfect expression on her face (she seems perfectly concentrated at what's she's doing) but also her pose is very expressive as well. I love her pointed toes, her slightly arched back and her hands..it's very hard to capture all those together so flawlessly!
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