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Published: 2012-11-11 14:50:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 53124; Favourites: 940; Downloads: 1098
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[en] First!!!! okay, do not think about it.In this art i rethought drawing lines, now better.
Over the "background" i did not try. nothing more interesting present.
Original size: 3300x4680
ART and Character "Cherry" belong to me
[ru] Первее !!!!!!!!!! ладно, не думайте об этом.
В данном искусстве я переосмыслил рисований линий, теперь более лучше.
Над заднем планом я не старался. больше ничего интересного нету.
Оригинальный размер: 3300x4680
АРТ и Персонаж "Черри" принадлежит мне.
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Comments: 81
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*sombody come get her she dancing like a stripper* this reminded me of that song lol
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First, i fell in love with Natali. And now Cherry. Damn, your girls are really good at winning boy's heart.
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Я могу намного лучших художников показать которые тоже рисуют что и я.
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This is amazing! I love the colours you picked out. It blends well with her personality! (btw I almost got a boner jk)
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This is a very charming piece! It is well done overall, and it is both sensual and comical. This is made possible by the well-done facial and bodily expressions and the use of different perspectives. I particularly adore panel 6 and the panels that lead up to that climax, where both the expression and position of the lil' guy perfectly denote that he is now at an inescapable fate. I find this to be both macabre and pleasing. Also, panel 10 effectively shares with me, the reader, that feeling of claustrophobia. The flow continues very smoothly right through till the end, where I find myself very satisfied at having read this. 
I find it difficult to point out places that this could improve. One thing that comes to mind after intense thought is that the end panels feel like some of the scale and dimensions are overly distorted a bit in favor of enlarging the little furry, and that maybe he is larger here than in other panels. However, this I understand may have been done for comedic effect. This gripe is really the only thing I can think of, and even then only for the sake of trying to find something sub-par about this piece at all.
I would give it less than five in originality only because a lot of this has been done before, however I can't resist giving it five because the dramatic opening panel and the satisfied jowls going "AH!" at panel 11 are both really unique here. It opens on both a literal and figurative cliffhanger, which drives the rest of this story well. And seeing the jowls sighing without any eyes or other bodily expression... that is just refreshing to me, especially as it is set directly after the dark throat panel, which perfectly contrasts it with the perfect timing.
This whole comic is superb, well polished with a variety of dynamic and dark perspectives. I totally love it. Keep making these, you are doing something you are obviously very skilled at.
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*grabs pillow* *hides crotch* nothing....I just have a pillow on my lap
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Yeah hiding nothing I swear
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Hehehe.....heh......aww fuck
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Ehh but can you blame me ;3
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You're welcome bro very nice art sorry for faving a lot my bad
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Prepare for troubles from her father.
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Oh no! Please, no! Q_Q She's just...so beautiful!
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i've fallen in love with her to
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I'll make u a deal, u assassinate Cherry's dad by giving you my only phantom blade I have and u can have my apple of eden, deal? Deal lets do it 😂😂😂😝😈 jk hahaha there not real, bye😈
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Me... Not really probobly friends and shes "playful"
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Probably both of us. Y'know, for a "playful" time.
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Обожаю твои работы)
ТЫ ОБАЛДЕННО РИСУЕШЬ !!!)))))))))
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Чувствуется лесть но ладно, спасибо.
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I love the anatomy (if you know what I mean) and I just really like the character overall!
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Heh "Smexy" )))
Ok, Thanks )
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She's so beautiful I even like the back ground! Keep up the good work!
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I like the new style, the outlines add a little shadow
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