DeaconStrucktor [2012-12-31 22:36:34 +0000 UTC]
The likeness is almost there. I think maybe the wings of the nostrils might need to be slightly wider. More of an issue for me is her jawline appears too square (viewer's right side) it seems to me from a quick browsing of google images that it should be less angular, but the angle in the reference photo (if you used one) would be the best baseline for comparison.
It may be an issue with an area of misjudged values, but I don't necessarily see any off-hand. (I'm not the best judge of that anyway). You might get more help from one of the many graphite or pencil artists groups here.
Hope that helps! You're work is really great; I look forward to seeing more of it in the future. Have a great New Year and welcome to DA!
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