CH3-CO-O-CH3 [2004-02-26 11:52:11 +0000 UTC]

i dunno what a kite is lol... so i dun really get to understand this one.... but the flow is nice

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hellboundangel [2003-04-04 09:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Encompassed by darkness
surrounded by light
I yearn to be carefree
and soar like a kite

an interesting image, nicely put. but i dont think that it is possible to ever be carefree in life, and if it is TELL ME WHAT DRUG DOES IT!!! now who didnt see that coming from me... i know how it feels to lose dreams and just feel like life is a waste of time. hang in there and live life, even if its just to prove that you were right, and life is a waste of time. lol

and i agree with alex, you have the fucking trippiest sceenshot...

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wintersrose [2003-03-29 04:11:04 +0000 UTC]

The total lack of punctuation makes a hard read. All the lines sort of go together in a strung on fashion without pause of structure. Thats the only thing really wrong with it.

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eternalwanderer [2003-03-27 02:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I like it. And i can really relate.

But always I am held back
By a feeling in my heart
from this I do not struggle
But watch my dream fall apart

This dream is not my own
In times past it may have been
It is no longer and now i must know
I have no dream, hope or destiny after what I've seen

that part of the poem i can relate to the most.

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satinzminion [2003-03-26 12:03:37 +0000 UTC]

nicenice im liking this.......sounds like my life....only i dunno if my dreams ever existed?
Nice job
Kurztn

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diabolicalfaerie [2003-03-26 08:22:45 +0000 UTC]

the paly on words really gives out how you...nice work...by the way...TRIPPY SCREENSHOT! (typical coming from me )

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