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meevilmonkey — Feelings - mm
Published: 2003-08-16 03:31:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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These thoughts and feelings,Won't go away.
Just make them shut up -
For even one day!
I wish I could tell you,
What's inside my head.
But I can't find the words,
In anything I have read.
All these things bottled up,
They're killing me inside.
There's nothing I can do -
A part of me has died.
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Comments: 5
Fine as it is. My only reccomendation is that you try taking up happy poetry. And if not happy, then philosophical, something deep and throught provoking. I know you have talent. But due to whatever condition, this work turned out typical. So, I really hope you'll try that. Then again, I went through the exact same phase. It should be over soon, and you'll be twice as good *smile*
But for now, I really hope you feel better.
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I think it's fine as is too. Nice poem.. I feel it.
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well written... if you wanna add to it some.... just expell on how you "died"... but personally i think its fine as is...
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Uh I know how you feel!
I like altho it did end suddenly.
Maybe you will finish it some day.
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Yeah, i think i will finish it, sometime.....probly in maths
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