Comments: 6
ozemperor [2003-07-26 14:14:16 +0000 UTC]
I like it, it is sad that so many people do not understand such things... To many hurt for they do not know and worse they refuse to listen.
-Oz Emperor
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NyssaDuck [2003-07-21 13:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Nicely written indeed, and so, so real that it hurts because I knew a girl who was walking home from the shops when I lived in Adelaide. She was a little popular girl... etc... I wasn't friends with her cause she was pretty nasty to me... anyways, she walked into an alley and was beaten and raped in there by a couple of 20+ something year old men...
Your story is so real...
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diabolicalfaerie [2003-07-21 09:43:45 +0000 UTC]
nicely written! very nicely written indeed. i think the end needs to be a bit more subtle but that just might be my opinion coz i like hard hitting endings. but anyway, you've doen a good job!
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cloudyfanx [2003-07-19 09:57:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow great [link] 's really nice!
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