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Published: 2003-05-23 11:04:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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Description I sit here in this cold damp room,
Remembering what life was like;
A glimmer of hope, shines faintly through the gloom.
And I feel my thoughts, and my heart, wander.

I wander through the school yard:
My eyes envision all children playing,
Before their innocence was marred,
And hearts and minds were open to all.

I wander through a forest glen:
Alive with life, alive with breath.
Along came dozers driven by men,
Now all is desolate; animals flee, trees are dead.

I wander down a bubbling creek:
Water trickles over a stoney bed.
Then people settle there and within a week,
Sewage, rubbish and chemicals, replace the clear, fresh water.

I wander through the outback:
The dusty soil providing a flourish of green.
Then came the rabbit, camel and pig by the stack;
The land cannot support them, and all again is dead.

I wander through a field of snow:
Snowleopards, tigers roam the pure white land.
Along came malicious hunters, and with their guns they go.
The animals roam no more; the snow, left stained with blood.

My thoughts and heart return to this place:
What once was beautiful, fragile, perfect,
Has left this world forever; gone without a trace.
What hope is left for us, this dismal human race?
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Comments: 4

CH3-CO-O-CH3 [2004-02-26 21:21:41 +0000 UTC]

such powerfull use of words!!!, extremely good piece, i love how you are able to write about more interesting subjects then love and heartbreak (like most of the stuff on DA (as well as mine ))... ur really good with words girl... i wonder about this too a lot... i mean where eill it all be by the time i get children... will they see? and if they do..will my vhildrens children see...

gosh... inspirational poem this is... neat work again erin... very neat

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CH3-CO-O-CH3 [2004-02-26 21:21:33 +0000 UTC]

such powerfull use of words!!!, extremely good piece, i love how you are able to write about more interesting subjects then love and heartbreak (like most of the stuff on DA (as well as mine ))... ur really good with words girl... i wonder about this too a lot... i mean where eill it all be by the time i get children... will they see? and if they do..will my vhildrens children see...

gosh... inspirational poem this is... neat work again erin... very neat

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Phoenixia [2003-10-19 09:56:20 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS REALLY GOOD! Definately a +fav... I can really see what you see, visualise the lands and the destruction, the despair it conveys so clearly. What hope is there left for our race, when everything that is good, we destroy?

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satinzminion [2003-05-25 11:52:45 +0000 UTC]

This is a sweet poem huni I t has sum special sense of positivity, i like that. Nice work
Kurztn

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