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meevilmonkey — Protest-Meevilmonkey
Published: 2003-03-19 07:34:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Description
Like an animal I am cagedImprisoned in this universe
Where the nations are enraged
And the people \'neath a curse
Men are set against men
Most of them will die
And yet it happens again
Will someone tell me why
Civilians are killed
Soldiers left maimed
The graves are all filled
But terrorists not tamed
This conflict is immoral
It is war that I detest
Don\'t strengthen this quarrell
Instead rally around and protest!
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Comments: 7
I'm going to simply say one thing. You rock at rhyming
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that's some nice poem again
i love the message, and you managed to put it into words very well. nice work
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how to get people on the street hahahaha sweet job!!!! really good, cept the second stanza wich sort of breaks the flow a lil. good poem tho
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The rhyme is a little forced. Going to put ADD PUNCTUATION on every one of your works, since it really makes it much more professional.
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Great job. I like it a lot, especially since i seem to have many of the same views as you.
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It is really good. It has been a while since I've seen sombody make such a good point with such grace. It has great flow and rythm. Excelent choice of words and grammar.
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holy jebus, this is really cool! and it IS good ;3 +fav
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