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ultranic-comics [2003-09-17 03:25:33 +0000 UTC]
very deep and well verbed. exellent job, I do so love great grammar ^_^
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montravont [2003-08-16 06:22:27 +0000 UTC]
very well done in my opinion.. whether thats worth a spit is your decision..... only thing i would say is on the line
"And to rest eternally."
I'd remove the "to" makes the line to long for the stanza... eternally brings in the needed time without dragging it down...
but even as it is... very well done indeed..
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