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MegaCrystalSwiftail — Point Com- Race you my friend

Published: 2016-04-12 13:34:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 721; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description This is a Point comission pic for She wanted to know if I could draw for her Flash, her Sonic OC Hedghog with my Sonic OC Crystal. I decided to draw the two of them about to start a friendly race against each other. I hope you'll love this my friend. ^^

Flash belongs to

Crystal belongs to me
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Comments: 22

Lady-Dash [2016-11-13 13:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Amazing done on this

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to Lady-Dash [2016-11-14 21:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much.

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Lady-Dash In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2016-11-14 21:19:08 +0000 UTC]

np a pleasure to see your art

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to Lady-Dash [2016-11-14 21:23:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad my artwork always pleases you.

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JupiterTheHedgehog22 [2016-10-12 15:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm well alright, not too be rude or anything but your drawing could do a little bit more work.

For starters the bodies looks a taaad bit off what with the messy line art, the characters being off centered and the overall anatomy of the characters being incorrect, though I have some solutions in how you could fix this for the line art, since you use MS Paint I suggest you try to use and implement the line tool just a tad bit more to smooth out your lines, you could also change the size of the brush to make your art less pixelly to fix the characters positioning though that's an easy one if you could just use the crop tool you could crop the characters and just drag them a little bit to the left and then I think you'll be A'ok . Now for their anatomy I'm not gonna sit here and lie your anatomy could really use some work but I'm sure you could fix that if you searched up some references next time to help you to draw there are also a bunch of youtube videos that you could watch if you're having trouble drawing a certain character  

Now on to another topic: coloring I'm not gonna go into too much detail here since it might come off as a ramble but here's what I see the problems is, that your drawing looks a little too...dull, flat colors are never a good thing unless you're going for a kind of style like inking buuut as an artist shading is always a must have since it adds more depth and detail to the drawing making it more appealing for the viewer as for the actual color for the characters well I have nothing to say for the hedgehog one because that's your friend's...but as for yours I think you should change the color scheme for your character a bit since the colors seem to be clashing too much with one another I suggest going thru a color chart as to see which color blends well with which as a final note...the background there's nothing wrong with it! it's just a bit well dull so to speak...add a bit more detail to the background there are so many ways to make a interesting even if you only have MS Paint you could make so many cool patterns with just the shapes tool alone! don't believe me well you could check out my gallery for some examples but really there is so much you can do with MS Paint!...even when other people don't seem to think so

so yes that is my full critique for this drawing, it's not that it's bad or anything looking thru your gallery I'm sure you can improve if you really try!  

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to JupiterTheHedgehog22 [2016-11-13 13:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the nice and polite critic. It's a nice change in critics. Yeah, I do need to improve a lot.

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JupiterTheHedgehog22 In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2016-11-13 13:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Hehe your welcome! I try to be polite when writing a critic, because there's really no point for the artist to take your advice if you're going to be rude to them.
Anyway like I said every artist has the potential to improve if they really try! keep at it and I'm sure you'll succeed!  

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CatDasher [2016-04-13 19:48:53 +0000 UTC]

this looks amazing done as allways Crystal       its a really super cute idea with them racing here   you used the outfit i made omg its so awesome XD and really fun to see


I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT           

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2016-04-13 19:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha ha, Thank you so much! ^_^ Hee hee, Thanks. I thought this would be a perfect idea since his name is Flash. XD Yeah, I just had to try your outfit idea because it looked so awesome to me. ^^ Once again, thank you so much.

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2016-04-13 19:59:25 +0000 UTC]

you very welcomes Crystal X3 aww bunnie hug   XD np^^ XD lol yeah funny is he if he be in sonic hereos he be "strenght" XD those things he has around his hands and feets are metal (but gold colored).. kinda like weights and a bit good in battle XD awww and it really makes me happy you think so and use it as much ya wants X3      and very welcomes again X3

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2016-04-13 20:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee. Really? Wow! I guess that would make sense because Flash is red after all. XD Really? Cool! ^^ I bet he'll be very powerful during fights.

Thanks and Don't worry, I'll be sure to use your form for her again sometime. ^^

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2016-04-13 20:35:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah XD he did in beginning look like a red shadow XD and to add speed to him seemed like it could make it more copy of shadow XD well its what i had in mind XD

yay X3 np i will look forward to it then to see XD

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2016-04-13 22:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Really? Wow! I never knew that.

Ok then, wish me luck.

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2016-04-13 22:32:59 +0000 UTC]

yeah he did XD here you can see it Flash The Hedgehog very first picture


i wish you  very much good luck XD

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xaviir20 [2016-04-13 19:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Very nice good job

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dagget10 [2016-04-13 19:30:29 +0000 UTC]

69/10

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KidaDragoness [2016-04-13 16:54:43 +0000 UTC]

great work here it looks really good and i like their designs

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to KidaDragoness [2016-10-12 19:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. ^^ I'm really glad you like this. ^^

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Mrgreen36 [2016-04-13 16:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Terrible. There's nothing much else to say. It's just a badly done pair of Sonic OCs that looks like it was scribbled in five minutes and coloured in one

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Dashing-Angel In reply to Mrgreen36 [2016-04-13 16:51:44 +0000 UTC]

So Mrgeen36, if you think it was terrible why bother to comment on it then? if ya dont like something its better to ignore it and move on instead.

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Mrgreen36 In reply to Dashing-Angel [2016-04-13 17:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Partly because of a little concept called free speech and partly because I believe in giving objective feedback rather than just biased gushing praise made to make the artist feel good

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Dashing-Angel In reply to Mrgreen36 [2016-04-13 18:29:43 +0000 UTC]

the  "free speech" understandable but the other part dont help much ya know? if ya wanna give critic then try give some tips or something on how to improve some of the parts.

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