insubordination [2007-04-02 02:02:22 +0000 UTC]
Good gods are you trying to make me like Asch even more, because you are definitely suceeding. Anyway. XD I LOL'D at this one. The dialouge between the two of them is amazing, and they're both perfectly in character! And your writing -GAH. *dies* Wonderful.
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RinnKruskov [2007-03-14 08:13:05 +0000 UTC]
You did a good job in writting everything. XDD, Asch sounds so sweet....
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Darkpsycho1000 [2007-03-13 21:31:31 +0000 UTC]
GAHHHH DX so cute/sweet >>;; well i mean, i'm sure Asch didn't MEAN to be sweet... but that's cute... >>;; there should be a sequel.. like.. where Asch comes back in == and he's STILL sitting there... XDD;;
god... <3 love this one too TT
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