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toni987 [2014-04-01 18:33:32 +0000 UTC]
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This is my first critique so tell me if I get something wrong e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>.
Well let's start with the physical appearance and clothes: I've seen the pages of Sky's Origin, so I can understand why she looks alike Sky; and about the clothes, you did a good decision in making her wearing somekind of clothes that are similar to clothes that were wore by people far in the past, because of her being an ancient goddess.
About color, I can't tell you anything yet because I don't know if you are gonna paint her; and about shading, you did a good job on the shades on her clothes and in the pic in general.
Well, and also I have also seen some lines are a little more thick or a little ''wrong'' (I don't which is the correct word e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>) than the rest of the lines, for example, in her right hand, the line that connects her wrist and her index finger, but well, no one is perfect.
But still, you have done a very good job ^^
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FireballStardraco [2014-04-08 21:07:54 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderfully done, I really love how you did her.
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Sonic-fan17 [2014-04-02 18:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow she looks beautiful!
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Blackwind06 [2014-04-01 20:28:30 +0000 UTC]
beautifulΒ
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Mel-Sky In reply to ShadowEspioFan1 [2014-04-01 19:17:12 +0000 UTC]
It sure is. This is more of a 'formal' outfit for Sora.Β Β
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