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alexa1661 [2013-04-01 05:32:19 +0000 UTC]

That ending was clever! Uhm but you should fix the english... I believe it's your first language?

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alexa1661 In reply to alexa1661 [2013-04-01 05:34:01 +0000 UTC]

sorry, I meant second language*

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lore4014 [2013-03-07 03:02:03 +0000 UTC]

AAAWWWW poor Touya, but, he have to deal with it xD

Exellent work!

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Reality-cat [2012-01-21 07:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Omfg <3 So cute~

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red-winged-angel [2010-02-05 07:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww~! Poor Toya. XD What broke though?

Ari chan

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melmoon In reply to red-winged-angel [2010-02-18 02:28:44 +0000 UTC]

the bell from the beggining of Tsubasa xD
the one who stops Sakura from telling Syaoran that she loves him *-*~

Touya deserves it xD

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red-winged-angel In reply to melmoon [2010-02-18 03:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Lmfao! Now I see! XDDD

Ari chan

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Aiko-Hirocho [2009-09-18 20:49:39 +0000 UTC]

very good story, but if that had happen the story would be very short xD

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melmoon In reply to Aiko-Hirocho [2009-09-28 00:10:03 +0000 UTC]

hehehe, indeed xD

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kirakira123456774 [2009-07-23 04:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Thats funny

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melmoon In reply to kirakira123456774 [2009-07-24 15:36:55 +0000 UTC]

X"DDD
thank you!!
poor Touya!

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kirakira123456774 In reply to melmoon [2009-07-24 23:11:59 +0000 UTC]

I know lol. You are amazing!!! You should make more

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melmoon In reply to kirakira123456774 [2009-07-25 02:43:59 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww X'33
thanks for the motivation!
but I have no ideas for a new one, now D:

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kirakira123456774 In reply to melmoon [2009-07-25 03:55:17 +0000 UTC]

I don't have any ideas but when i do I will let you know! Maybe something to do with Sakura and Syaoran.

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melmoon In reply to kirakira123456774 [2009-07-25 12:23:59 +0000 UTC]

okokokkok X'3
deal!

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dani-naomi [2009-07-13 22:09:11 +0000 UTC]

my little baby JOFDKSPFKDSPOFKDSFOPSD XDDDDDD
GOSTEI GOSTEI 8D FAZ CΓ“IAS E SAI VENDENDOOO /O/

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melmoon In reply to dani-naomi [2009-07-14 14:23:59 +0000 UTC]

BDOASBÇDOIOIBDOIASBDOIBASDOI'
NΓ“N, imprimir Γ© caro D:

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dani-naomi In reply to melmoon [2009-07-15 20:17:56 +0000 UTC]

JOFKSDFPOSD mas com o dinheiro q vce pode ganhar cobre as impressΓ΅es ;D /capitalismo oi

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annybori [2009-05-07 18:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, so funny! XD

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melmoon In reply to annybori [2009-05-09 15:06:56 +0000 UTC]

XDD

thank you, hehehe!!

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barbypornea [2009-04-02 13:42:20 +0000 UTC]

kyaaaa~

I read it, and it's good!!!

Keep up the good work!

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melmoon In reply to barbypornea [2009-04-03 15:24:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you, Barbie >"<

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MoPotter [2009-04-02 04:38:57 +0000 UTC]

haha, nice ending

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melmoon In reply to MoPotter [2009-04-02 08:10:57 +0000 UTC]

gyaaaa
thank you thank you xD
Touyaa is great, hehe!

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MoPotter In reply to melmoon [2009-04-02 20:12:20 +0000 UTC]

i want to see him try and challenge syoarna to a duel after he returns back from thier journey..syaoran would kick his butt!! haha

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melmoon In reply to MoPotter [2009-04-03 02:39:02 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAA XD
I feel pitty for Touya, actually
and I think Sakura would be sad if they actually fight xD

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MoPotter In reply to melmoon [2009-04-03 05:15:44 +0000 UTC]

that's true, she'd probably freak out!! my friend just recently came up with this awesome [like, one page long] fanfic [wwhich she still hasn't written out yet, it's still in her mind!] about touya and syaoran fighting for fun but sakura gets the wrong impressiong and she freaks out on touya and it kind of goes to a deja vu of tokyo revelations where the Rsyaoran is about to kill his clone but sakura stops him...yeah, it's really good though!

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melmoon In reply to MoPotter [2009-04-03 15:30:37 +0000 UTC]

OMG XD
what a mess xDD

really good idea, though

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MoPotter In reply to melmoon [2009-04-03 20:14:22 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah!!! and she's pretty brilliant with the whole 'fanfic' area!! =]

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Toriichi [2009-03-26 03:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Wahahah
don't worry touya-sama
sakura and syaoran doing well

can I to be tomoyo?? 'cause I want record saku and syao doing give the video to touya

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melmoon In reply to Toriichi [2009-03-30 07:20:54 +0000 UTC]

XDD
HAHA, I think he'd have a heart attack xD

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Toriichi In reply to melmoon [2009-03-30 10:24:47 +0000 UTC]

yup
I want to see Touya's face and he'll be fainted~

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ChainsOfFreedom [2009-03-23 15:06:34 +0000 UTC]

was sooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuteeee

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melmoon In reply to ChainsOfFreedom [2009-03-24 00:06:08 +0000 UTC]

gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Tochik [2009-03-22 03:35:01 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAAHAHAH epic end! HAHAHAHA

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melmoon In reply to Tochik [2009-03-23 09:18:20 +0000 UTC]

haha xDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
thanksss

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Bii-chan [2009-03-21 13:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Pena que sou noob em inglΓͺs, mas captei a histΓ³ria XDDDD

Adorei <3

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melmoon In reply to Bii-chan [2009-03-21 16:00:39 +0000 UTC]

VDUYASCDUAYSCDUYACSUYDCUASYDCAS XD
mΓ³ lovey dovey ~
VPA ESTUDAR INGRÊIS DX
e obrigada *_*

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Bii-chan In reply to melmoon [2009-03-22 01:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Preferi estudar japonΓͺs, Γ© mais divertido u3u
Nada xuxu <3

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melmoon In reply to Bii-chan [2009-03-22 02:20:40 +0000 UTC]

DX

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GabrielK [2009-03-21 02:57:23 +0000 UTC]

ficou mt bom!
vc emula bem o traço do clamp!
parabens!
ficou foda!

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melmoon In reply to GabrielK [2009-03-21 11:26:20 +0000 UTC]

sΓ©rio? vuvduyscauydcyasudas
nem tanto, mas valeu valeeeeeeeeeus *_*

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Calks89 [2009-03-20 15:13:30 +0000 UTC]

that last page really made me laugh.

Great doujinshi

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melmoon In reply to Calks89 [2009-03-21 11:32:13 +0000 UTC]

hehehe X3
Touya's suffering is funny xD
thaaaaaank you <333333

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Amatsu-Kaze [2009-03-20 01:58:51 +0000 UTC]

lol I didn't see that coming

and... how did big brother know what was happening?! *cough*stalker*cough*

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melmoon In reply to Amatsu-Kaze [2009-03-20 02:28:49 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHHA XDDDDDDD
spies...

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aqua-queen [2009-03-19 12:21:16 +0000 UTC]

oh god!! i love the hilairous ending!! wonderful job mel-chan!! you did the paneling so well, i'm jealous. the whole doujinshi was adorable!

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melmoon In reply to aqua-queen [2009-03-20 03:01:34 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHA XD
I think you'd do it better ~
PLEASE, DO A DOUJINSHI

anyways, thanks, Joy-chan <3

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aqua-queen In reply to melmoon [2009-03-21 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]

i doubt it mel-chan. my paneling skills are, how should i say this.... horrible? XD
i did part of a doujinshi, kind of. XD my class was reading romeo and juliet and i drew a manga script of the balcony scene. XD LOL!
if you like, i'll scan it. then you can tell me i did it right.
anyways, it was a pleasure viewing and faving your masterpieces!!

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melmoon In reply to aqua-queen [2009-03-21 11:40:08 +0000 UTC]

BYEHEHEHHEHE
SHOOOOOOOOW ME PLEASE

masterpiece??
HAHA XDD
you need a psycologist...

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