Fourthebetter [2014-08-31 15:18:24 +0000 UTC]
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First off, I'm a poet, so do not take my advice heavily. Initially, what I see is a figure in a glow. This glow makes me think of the title, and dawn/morning/beginning. Very good. Then I look at the picture and see what seems to be a well off teenager that is reading something on her phone/whatever that thing in her hand is. She is dressed for school and has her schoolbag (all of which is beautifully drawn). She may be starting school, she may be a senior. Whichever, I think doesn't matter, it makes us, the readers, think. Overall a very good piece.
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churchmouse0010 [2016-04-27 23:51:09 +0000 UTC]
I like your style