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MensjeDeZeemeermin β€” Centaur on a Hill
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Published: 2016-10-05 04:45:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3994; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description I pause, at sunset, on a hill,
And watch the sky turn dark, and still,
I swish my tail, thoughtfully,
And think about eternity.

Each moment will not come again,
Or will they, someday? Β If so, when?
I shift my weight, adjust my hooves,
And notice how the world moves.

I learn, I age, gain, and the price,
I profit by, and give advice.
There's grey in certain parts of me,
A treasure-trove, of memory.

There's lovers held, and races won,
There's things both well, and badly done.
I can be proud, I should be meek,
I grow more thoughtful, when I speak.

And yet, I watch the foals at play,
I hear the things their mothers say,
And smile, in secret, and stand guard,
No, keeping to myself's not hard.

I've old friends scented, in the breeze,
And new friends met, to pass at ease
A lazy hour in drink, and song,
And such an hour is not long.

I feel, still, something lies ahead,
Good books to be obtained, and read.
Old knowledge found, and brought to light,
And poems and tales I'm meant to write.

And so, I pause upon this hill,
I've had so much, but not my fill
Of joy, of sadness, peace, and strife,
So much still yet to live, of life.
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Comments: 34

HyperactiveParanoid [2017-05-16 18:05:16 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! *^*

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to HyperactiveParanoid [2017-05-16 20:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, very much... I think you'd also like this one...

Beneath the SurfaceBeneath the Surface
She steels herself for battle in the steel shelves of hell,
And thinks of meadows where she played, so many Springs ago.
She thinks of sand swept by the sea, and shining, pretty things,
And marches out into the dust, the heat, the noise, the smell.
Her fantasies and dreams of peace are bludgeoned by harsh words,
They'll have her do three things at once, and in no time at all.
Flourescent lights burn out the sun reflected forth from dew,
The howling of low-flying jets drowns out the song of birds.
She holds her eyes clasped shut and wears a flowing, gauzy gown,
And runs bare-footed through soft moss beside a cheerful stream,
And fights for her survival in this insubstantial dream,
That's shattered by the news that the computer system's down.
She floats, encased in silver scales, in blue seas all alone
Or flits on faerie wings and takes her ease within a rose.
Or stares with happy vanity, a horn above her nose,
And writhes at yet another grating voice upon the phone.


and my poems and one story about lamias might intrigue you...

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Sacron22 [2017-04-15 12:33:35 +0000 UTC]

The thoughts in this pone are human and simple and important.Β  Nicely done.Β 

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to Sacron22 [2017-04-15 21:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much...

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Sacron22 In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2017-04-17 16:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Β 

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scarletwhite [2016-10-17 13:50:57 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem, it is so well written

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to scarletwhite [2016-10-17 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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Kitsune64 [2016-10-11 17:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work. It creates a very serene and contemplative mood, with just a touch of the bittersweet. Nicely done!

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to Kitsune64 [2016-10-12 05:18:40 +0000 UTC]

So glad that one of my centaurs could please you, yours have so pleased me.

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Kitsune64 In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-13 23:12:36 +0000 UTC]

It makes me happy to hear that. ^_^

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SempreSirena [2016-10-09 21:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Very nice story, reminds me of the good days during roleplay. Β Thank you for sharing it with the community!

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to SempreSirena [2016-10-10 03:20:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm so very honored and grateful that you thought so highly of the poem.

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SempreSirena In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-10 08:16:36 +0000 UTC]

it is quite beautiful, coaxing my mind into the past, reflecting upon the long days of centaur play. Β Good, honest and fun RP, reminding me of Dawn.

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HawthorneFae [2016-10-09 19:12:27 +0000 UTC]

You have a way of choosing just the right words I feel like~ And carrying an atmosphere through an entire work.
This is awesome, kudos~

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to HawthorneFae [2016-10-10 03:20:30 +0000 UTC]

What a kind thing to say! Β Thank you, very much.

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HawthorneFae In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-13 20:16:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem~ It's not often I find poetry I really like, so you totally deserve it~

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IME-Photography [2016-10-06 06:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to IME-Photography [2016-10-06 06:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you--I am greatly honored.

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IME-Photography In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-06 13:10:59 +0000 UTC]

❀️❀️❀️

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IME-Photography In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-06 13:09:08 +0000 UTC]

❀️❀️❀️

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uglygosling [2016-10-05 23:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Never more will IΒ be saddle sore
For truth be told now I am a 'taur

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to uglygosling [2016-10-06 04:11:14 +0000 UTC]

You've saddled yourself with THAT appellation? Β I'm very honored that you so liked the poem.

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uglygosling In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-06 22:49:16 +0000 UTC]

I didn't mean it quite that way, I was trying to look at things from the centaur's point of view.

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mattaui [2016-10-05 22:12:28 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, nicely done.

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to mattaui [2016-10-06 04:11:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad something of mine pleased you as your own work has delighted me.

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Olga17 [2016-10-05 19:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Great poetry!

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to Olga17 [2016-10-06 04:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much.

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Olga17 In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-06 17:16:38 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!Β 

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Agent505 [2016-10-05 13:25:23 +0000 UTC]

You can probably lose some of the extra commas, but very well done.

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to Agent505 [2016-10-06 04:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank, you, I'm, sure. Β Too, many, notes, Mozart?

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Agent505 In reply to MensjeDeZeemeermin [2016-10-06 04:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Okay, it's your poem.

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to Agent505 [2016-10-06 05:05:37 +0000 UTC]

True, enough. Β I do appreciate your interest and feedback, sincerely. Β I greatly respect your own careful work.

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dragondoodle [2016-10-05 04:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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MensjeDeZeemeermin In reply to dragondoodle [2016-10-05 04:48:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad you liked it!

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