Jukas-Kayne [2005-07-16 05:41:03 +0000 UTC]
I liked the musical rhythm and rhyme of this piece and fully enjoyed the imagry that you were using and the mystical tension that was being built up. I was really just getting into this piece and was hoping that it would go on for a lot longer and explore in more fascinating detail about the kelpie which this poem seems to only tantalisingly introduce. In my opinion its definately got great potential to build and extend into a richly fulfilling and evocative childrens story-song. +Fav
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menyin In reply to Jukas-Kayne [2005-09-10 00:21:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, wow. I am so very glad you enjoyed, and appreciate you faving this poem as well. Thank you, I might consider doing so. Sorry for the delayed reply, I so rarely log in to this account.
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