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Published: 2012-01-08 20:47:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 17
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ZOMG IT'S TIGERSTAR!
ASDFGHJK >w<This is my second drawing of Tigerstar
I think I've improved a bunch on this picture >w< My older one was creepy ._____.
Tell me if you think I should put a mature content warning on this ;w;
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Tigerstar: (C) Erin Hunter
Art: (C) Me
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Comments: 11
(Don't really know how to critique) The tail seems to lumpy and fat. It would be better to make a circle for its bum, then add the tail, then erase the circle till it seems like a real tail. The claws seem too thick and dull, like it has been to the groomers. It would be nice to add some tufts on the elbows and bottom cheeks. The eyebrows seem like lines for the tabby. Closer to the eyes and more thick would be good. The inside of the ears should be bigger. The chest should be fat and then going up when it hits the middle of the belly. (not good explanation..) The neck could be bigger and the shoulders lower. The eyes could be thicker for the outline, explaining the little black thingy. When you reach the lower part of the leg you should make it skinny, to know where the paw starts. The cat seems to be standing on its toes, and not its feet. Adding some vision of the paw pads could be good. The blood doesn't really seem like real blood, (on under the cats paw) it seems like water dyed with dark red. If there were blood on the paw and some streaks of blood running down, it would make more sense. Overall, about 3.4 1/2 stars. Since this is my first critique, I am not sure if I did it right.
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Very good I love his expression, great colors!!
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What the heck does that stand for?
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