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mephistofee β€” Ned Stark by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-08-06 14:09:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1861; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 27
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Description Used almost every pencil i had for this ... made alot of mistakes and learned alot - I have taken on the task to draw all the characters I like from Β "Game of Thrones" So next will be either Arya or Jon Snow who knows nothing.
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Comments: 19

WindFleuret [2015-12-14 20:18:35 +0000 UTC]

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I really love the detail there, especially the wrinkles and the metal handle. There are a few things that are not quite there in my opinion.

First is the value - everything seem in the middle range really, no whites or blacks, everything is rather middle gray. In general having contrast or at least higher range of value provide bigger impact and better appeal in general, even if you have less details, and with your level of precision adding just that it would look really amazing.

Another thing i think you cna practice more on is the fur/hair. It also look rather flat, the shadows, the hair, the highlights seem to be a little missing there. Some more detail or just spending 1-2 hours more polishing the hair would make it look quite epic

I give you 10/10 for the left part of the hair (right from his point of view) where you have darker background and lighter hair, but then the background it self is kind of too basic. I know you want to put focus on the face, but havig at least a little detai there would make it pretty cool looking in general.

I rated low for originality, since its painting from an image, which is cool and all, its just that that is now what originaliy means, please dont take it harsh.

For technique 4/5 becuase of the hair and fur, the rest is just amazing.

In general, awesome painting, keep it up!!

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TwistMyForm In reply to WindFleuret [2015-12-15 03:43:18 +0000 UTC]

I think this drawing is awesome. The fur looks great. The only weak point I see is the fur on the top right of the drawing, there is too much gray area between the strand of hair and the fur. Seriously though, its amazing.

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mephistofee In reply to WindFleuret [2015-12-14 20:29:48 +0000 UTC]

First of all Thank you a lot for taking the time to review this. You have actually pinpointed one of my weaknesses . I am a bit scared to come on strong with the darker pencils thus sometimes the contrast is missing which makes it seem rather gray in some places like you said.Β 

I will keep this in mind for my future drawings Β 

Thank you xo

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WindFleuret In reply to mephistofee [2015-12-14 21:57:29 +0000 UTC]

A few tips. Try drawing something using charcoal. Want it or not it will force you to go dark. After you do 2-3 paintings with charcoal, get one 6 or 8B pencil and make sure you get the darkest you can from it on your core shadows. Go from there building the mid and light tones. Take it as practice to make yourself be able of putting real darks. Just so you know you can do it and it wont hurt ^^ So yeah, in short - draw the darkest you can first, and build from it, just make sure you leave pure white or very light graphite on the paper.

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earlsombrero [2016-02-08 20:41:06 +0000 UTC]

This is so powerful!

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mephistofee In reply to earlsombrero [2016-02-09 17:37:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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NelliesArtWorks [2013-02-25 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!!!!

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Fantaasiatoidab [2012-08-19 09:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh my dear lord, I love this!! I don't know exactly what makes it so damn powerful picture, but.. Wow.. This is very well done!

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Klaustrophil [2012-08-10 18:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! wow - this is my first fav on a traditional piece, not that I don`t like traditional art but initial und zΓΌndung. Amazing progress.

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Dodo-Vogel [2012-08-08 08:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I feel so baad ;A; Drew this last month or so, and you did so much better /D I hope no one ever sees them together /D
I love his wrinkles & beard and the hilt of his sword I look forward on seeing your Arya & Jon Snow :3

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Phoenix-Foot [2012-08-07 21:58:49 +0000 UTC]

love this

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VanessaPortrait [2012-08-07 11:00:36 +0000 UTC]

It's really good, I really like Ned, I hope to see more of Game of Thrones, it is a great serie and best books
I hope you have Arya or Jon soon! they're my favourite characters hehe

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YukiChan89 [2012-08-06 21:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful piece! Very, very good drawing! I dont know why u have only two works in your gallery! i want to see more ! xD

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mephistofee In reply to YukiChan89 [2012-08-06 22:07:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you :] i actually have a couple more deviations but they are all digital art - but i will be drawing more in future atm i am focusing on the Game of thrones series - but if you have any suggestions as to what i should draw then say so.

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YukiChan89 In reply to mephistofee [2012-08-07 08:09:30 +0000 UTC]

I love Game of Thrones series so u could draw all off the characters xD U said u want to draw Jon Snow, he and Tyrion Lannister are my favourite characters. It would be great if You draw them

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mephistofee In reply to YukiChan89 [2012-08-07 08:27:52 +0000 UTC]

So it is then , i decided to try something more difficult as a starter - to see what i suck at and what i should practice on -but right after that i will gladly draw every single character of game of thrones LOL - maybe i will be done till i am 40

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YukiChan89 In reply to mephistofee [2012-08-07 08:47:27 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait xD

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MeduZZa13 [2012-08-06 14:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful! I like how you brightening a hair and fur

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mephistofee In reply to MeduZZa13 [2012-08-06 14:39:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you sweetie.

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