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Published: 2010-01-01 13:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description I crave, I want.
I beg, I try.
I need, I know.
I break, I die.
I live this life, and I cannot change what cannot be changed,
but you took from me the only thing that held me together.

I had, I achieve.
I try, I adventure.
I begin, I succeed.
I fail, I support.
I lose, I cry.
The pain welled up inside me, with no escape, no outlet,
and every moment I chipped away you were too busy turning your back.

I drain, I overcome.
I stumble, I fall.
I lay, I surcome.
I flee, I escape.
I forgive, I forget.
And every moment I cry I remember every promise you broke,
for all the lies you told, were a cover for every promise before that.

And I crave...
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Comments: 3

MiladyOfMoonlight [2010-01-01 15:32:34 +0000 UTC]

So sad, but so beautiful..
I can relate to it.
Nicely written!

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mercy4jane In reply to MiladyOfMoonlight [2010-01-02 00:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'd like people to be able to relate to what I write.
I never write a thing that doesn't come straight from the heart, or it wouldn't come out as good.

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MiladyOfMoonlight In reply to mercy4jane [2010-01-02 10:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, me too. Pure feelings create better poetry than anything that isn't pure enough.

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