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Raphsady [2006-08-15 23:52:03 +0000 UTC]
reading, reading, Reading, READING!!!! MORE!!! there must be more! i am sucking up these stories as if they were the very air i breathe. please tell me you have more.
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Raphsady In reply to MerianMoriarty [2006-08-16 11:54:00 +0000 UTC]
i know, i read rainstorn part 1 all the way thru killing kind part 3. you really are a very good writer. my favorite on naruto fan-fics.
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KageShin [2005-09-16 04:29:51 +0000 UTC]
Yay yay yay yay yay.
Nicely done! I really like the way Itachi's (*gasp* ya don't say... again) character is developing. He is doing all of this to prove a point and doesn't realize how insane he sounds. It's really rather nice. His solution is flawed, but it is extremely effective. I do like that he sees what a lot of people try to ignore.
The fact that Kakashi sees Naruto as a problem, but not one to actively intervene with, works. Itachi wanted to stop the fight, but Kakashi just wanted to stop Naruto if he snapped. Is there any reason that Kakashi didn't think that interests would better be served by stopping the stoning before Naruto had a chance to snap? Or is this an opportunity to see a side of Kakashi that is just a little bit biased towards eliminating a threat toward his village and is willing to let a situation progress to a point where killing Naruto is the only option? Interesting either way, but which did you intend?
Yoshi! Dekita!
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MerianMoriarty In reply to KageShin [2005-09-16 04:55:54 +0000 UTC]
bwahahaha, wouldn't you like to know my intentions! bwahahahahahaha--
oh, sorry. *ahem*
the full situation is actually that Kakashi has been given orders he doesn't like/agree with, so he's forced himself to become detached; at the same time, he realizes that Naruto will never become a strong person if he's rescued all the time; and the third factor here is that, yes, Kakashi feels that acting in the interests of the village as a whole is a lot more important than acting in Naruto's interests. it's a great juxtaposition -- to protect his sensei's child, or to protect his sensei's beloved village. hm.... ^_^
another contributing factor there is that Sandaime Hokage had a habit of dealing with his problems very passively -- he let Orochimaru escape the first time, he let Naruto live alone for all that time, he didn't properlly deal with the siege until the last moment, etc. so i think his orders to Kakashi would have been a bit vague, along the lines of 'make sure no one gets seriously hurt,' or something. on top of that, he would have realized that the most dangerous thing for Naruto would be if someone *else* got hurt -- the village would be up in arms to have him killed. if Naruto gets hurt, he fixes right back up. it's not the nicest thing, maybe, but it kept the kid alive, right?
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lex-n-karu [2005-08-25 20:58:54 +0000 UTC]
(i love the beginning. very sexy and sweet without doing more than _mentioning_ sex.)
(ah, Kakashi's more serious side again. nicely done, the way he keeps Sousuke from letting go of his childhood so easily. Reika-chan seems extremely perceptive in the scene with Iruka; is this a side we haven't seen, something that just kind of develops for someone in a position like head of a hospital? i think Iruka mentioned something about her seeming very maternal, is this another facet of that?)
(Itachi's slide into madness is very well done. we start to see the way his priorities align, and the extent to which he'll go, and perhaps the extent to which he planned ahead. very nice. and is it just me, or is Okosa very Vimes-ish when he stands there and tries to figure out what Itachi's thinking without getting in the wrong side of a psychopath? maybe most grumpy old men take a similar approach *shrug*)
(forgot to mention! Sousuke's POV scene is very good. it lets us see how mentally mature he really is, as well as how much he listened to and relies upon his mother's advice -- and indirectly, what kind of person Kisa was.)
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