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Epiaruna [2009-05-15 19:18:15 +0000 UTC]
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To be completely honest, I think you did really good with this (I know this is a rather late crit, but I’m just getting back into the art loop, so I do apologize). I really like the pose you’ve given her here—it’s very flowing and not awkward at all. I especially like the positioning of her hands and the shell you’ve placed in her hand—the inclusion of the same gold-yellow color you used for her hair really balances out the piece. Great detailing on her braids, as well—that had to take a ridiculous amount of time.
Critique-wise, there’s only a few nitpicks I’m going to mention. The hair is fantastic, as I’ve said above, but the way you’ve drawn it makes it look like the hair follicles are going down her neck or that her neck is very thin. Either by giving her more hair to the right (our right) or by giving her more of a neck would fix that. As for her hands, the leftmost one appears to be a tad too short in relation to the hand holding the shell. As well as this, the rightmost part of her face appears to be a bit too slanted—her eye appears as if it’s almost floating off of her face. By adding just a tiny bit of cheek below her eye would make it appear a bit more proportionate—but only a sliver. The last thing I can add is though I absolutely love the red of her body, a tiny bit of blue (the scales reflecting the ocean’s color) at the very edges of her body would make her fit into the image rather than looking as if she was slapped on the top of the background, so to say. An example is here . Regardless, I think this is a fantastic piece.
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Chibi-Fisch [2010-10-25 03:25:55 +0000 UTC]
me likes
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IK16 In reply to Chibi-Fisch [2018-11-06 00:22:38 +0000 UTC]
I do too.
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FerianMoon [2009-09-16 22:09:10 +0000 UTC]
That's such... and interesting mermaid!
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fatbishlover [2009-05-12 21:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Great Job!
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Mermaid-Kalo In reply to Lucreisiablack [2009-05-03 06:07:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank yooo <3
I was just holding off on putting it in JPEG form and getting it post ready.
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Tanginello [2009-04-29 04:48:34 +0000 UTC]
Man, illustrator is a bitch. I had a really hard time with it and I was just doing some technical drawings.
This is really great, though! I love all the details in the hair and the spots. Your color choices are beautiful, too. I love red + gold. The lineweights and gradients all look pretty awesome, too.
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Mermaid-Kalo In reply to Tanginello [2009-05-03 06:07:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! <3
I really thought the same thing about illustrator too, but the more I worked with it, the more I came to like it. I can't "draw" in it though. I gotta trace whatever I'm going for, otherwise, it's too tough >.<
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Tanginello In reply to Mermaid-Kalo [2009-05-04 03:50:29 +0000 UTC]
I used a tablet + pen tool when I drew with Illustrator, but it was frustrating and pretty slow. Wouldn't really recommend it unless you've got a looot of time to figure it all out.
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