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IblisTrigger451 [2009-04-05 15:59:50 +0000 UTC]

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So funny, so witty, and so well done. The focus is extremely good on this. It's so good I can see the tiny water droplets on the bottom. And the red color really stands out - I can imagine the "blood" from that fruit (or vegetable, however you see it) after its been turned to ketchup (mmm). I like how the fist rams dead on into its victim. It's stance is very firm and horizontal rather than somewhat crooked - it's as if you practiced your posture for it, hehe. And not to mention, the blurry whoosh effect you put on there gives that humourously ominous tone to the picture.

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mervan In reply to IblisTrigger451 [2009-04-05 17:34:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you for taking time to write the critique. i really appreciate it.

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IblisTrigger451 In reply to mervan [2009-04-05 18:08:53 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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cre-dia [2009-04-05 15:59:23 +0000 UTC]

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absolutely love this concept, it's witty and well executed. great job. i like the lighting, and how it highlights the tomato, drawing your eye in. the composition is nice, as well. : )

the only thing i would play with is maybe the tones in the picture. i would like to see a bit less yellow in the photo (not that the picture LOOKS yellow, but slightly less might bring out the picture a bit more.) maybe even adding a slight blue tone.

that's speaking personal preference, however. overall i think this is well executed, and i love how simple the photo feels in essence. again, good job.

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mervan In reply to cre-dia [2009-04-05 17:36:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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KururuTheRotom [2010-10-17 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]

I can picture this being in matrix style.

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LeviSei [2010-09-09 16:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is pretty neat. I like how the tomato seems to be still as everything else is in motion towards it, really gives this a nice feel. Also the contrasting colors between the sort of bland background(shirt)/plain skin tones and then the redness/shiny-ness of the tomato is also interesting. Good job!

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Tooga [2010-04-04 08:49:37 +0000 UTC]

you're in my journal !

<3 Features

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Ms-lovelyAnGel [2009-10-05 15:05:35 +0000 UTC]

the idea is funny and the tone of the picture is nice

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mistynight49 [2009-09-11 04:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Made me lol XD For some reason it's so funny that the tomato is just THERE, while everything else is rushing towards it.

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S0uthernSun [2009-08-10 11:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful work has been featured here [link]

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JonasKr [2009-07-12 12:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Hello! You've been featured in my latest news article! You can find it here:

[link]

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chirkhef [2009-06-20 09:44:59 +0000 UTC]

çook yaratıcı olmuş üstelik düşük deklanşörden elin hareketi gayet net anlaşiliyor
kaç tane domates telef oldu bu fotograf için

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SaraThePsychic [2009-06-14 09:47:40 +0000 UTC]

poor little tomato..I hope he aspired to be ketchup....nice shot nonetheless.

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janati [2009-06-12 08:53:34 +0000 UTC]

looooool !! strong concep
loved it !

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Melidesidero [2009-05-04 22:08:42 +0000 UTC]

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Zesuri [2009-05-02 19:20:02 +0000 UTC]

One of the few shots that can truly be considered "perfect."

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mervan In reply to Zesuri [2009-05-03 01:02:31 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate it.

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laura242 [2009-05-02 11:28:35 +0000 UTC]

featured: [link]

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Gemellary [2009-04-19 12:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Featured in my Journal!

[link]

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rroyy [2009-04-15 19:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Yorumlarla ilgilenir...

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mervan In reply to rroyy [2009-04-15 23:55:18 +0000 UTC]

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ashsivils [2009-04-12 08:10:12 +0000 UTC]

I honestly would love to find something "wrong"
but I fear there is nothing I can critique. I feel that
the concept and the execution was well thought
out. I like the crop, usually I dislike when the subject
is centered, this however fits perfectly.

(too short to be considered a critique)

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mervan In reply to ashsivils [2009-04-12 13:37:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i really appreciate it.

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ashsivils In reply to mervan [2009-04-12 20:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Anytime darling

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Mobileo [2009-04-06 21:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Ben demiştim ona, böyle gidersen ketçap olacaksın diye

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mervan In reply to Mobileo [2009-04-06 21:54:50 +0000 UTC]

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Mobileo In reply to mervan [2009-04-06 21:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Olayı anlamak isterseniz, sayfama beklerim

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Daughter-of-Peneus [2009-04-06 21:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Harika otesi idamdan onceki ani domatesin

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mervan In reply to Daughter-of-Peneus [2009-04-06 21:55:09 +0000 UTC]

tesekkurler.

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felicia-agony [2009-04-06 18:08:15 +0000 UTC]

er bişi ya

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mervan In reply to felicia-agony [2009-04-06 18:37:07 +0000 UTC]

tesekkurler

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felicia-agony In reply to mervan [2009-04-06 19:25:38 +0000 UTC]

rica

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BlackCarrionRose [2009-04-06 16:08:51 +0000 UTC]

clever, I like it!

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Mightybagderlord [2009-04-05 16:10:31 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how it will come out... as ketchup.... or just a big lump of....well... i don't know. Nice man really loved it and you made the hand look like it was going super fast or i just looks like that. GREATNESS is what they call this

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mervan In reply to Mightybagderlord [2009-04-05 17:36:43 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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Mightybagderlord In reply to mervan [2009-04-05 23:40:03 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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moonlightchaos [2009-04-05 14:57:31 +0000 UTC]

A clever idea. Nice.

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mervan In reply to moonlightchaos [2009-04-05 15:12:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Czikulinka [2009-04-04 18:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Love the idea =]

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mervan In reply to Czikulinka [2009-04-04 18:20:51 +0000 UTC]

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ruhegeist [2009-04-04 15:54:28 +0000 UTC]

very nice focus, great job!

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mervan In reply to ruhegeist [2009-04-04 15:58:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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berkozturk [2009-04-04 15:40:18 +0000 UTC]

adını ketçap koyman işi dahada iyi yapmıs.tebrikler

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mervan In reply to berkozturk [2009-04-04 15:40:33 +0000 UTC]

tesekkurler

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