metamage [2015-08-16 19:55:31 +0000 UTC]
My dear Mr. Fox,
How jolly good of you, Sir! I most appreciate your kind acceptance of my small work, bitten off from my full-length compendium called . . . The Trials and Tribulations of a Male Guardian, for the Premier Issue of your much anticipated New Journal, provocatively called Dreadful-Tales. I believe we are of one mind, Sir! I suggest we call this refreshing literary and pictorial trend -- The New Victorian Ethos! I salute you. You bring a further blossoming of literary breeding and gentility to a sorely lacking world.
However, a caveat, Mr. Fox. I must admit displeasure at your high-handed retitling of my true-story retelling, "A Gentle Walk in the Garden of a Child-Woman's Life" to the somewhat fantastic, "To Dine on Black and Red." I understand the need for sensationalism in our overwrought era of publishing, but really Sir! Must you be so BOLD?
Perhaps you may repay this with a kindness, Sir. I suggest we retire to my private club for a bit of the what, what? eh, Mr. Fox?? I have other submissions - other 'walks' if you will, within my most selective garden. I have turned many a flower here, over the years, boys, girls, those in-between . . . (most with low breeding, of course,) and perhaps I could edify you as to the true nature of Guardianship. You are a man of tastes, if I am not mistaken.
I leave you the rarely extended black-edged card, which will gain you entrance to my club, The Laundress. On the back I've written a code needed for entry - a series of knocks required in pattern that will admit you to the inner sensorium. I shall wait with exquisite anticipation for your arrival. Think only, of a dram of Absinthe, a bit of the pipe, and roast lamb on Indian Rice as payment for your certain liberty.
I look forward to a most robust repast. Do come, Sir. We have MUCH to discuss.
No need to R.S.V.P.
M. Schtumer
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metamage In reply to JazmarArts [2015-08-04 18:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh, AWESOME! This one is pretty dense to read. I'm really glad you plowed through it and even more, LIKED IT! (That makes my day!) I went over the top with the Victorian-like writing, I think, so not many bothered to read it. The fact that you did makes my heart sing!
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JazmarArts In reply to metamage [2015-08-05 10:09:38 +0000 UTC]
I like the over the top-ness it really creates this seriously creepy vibe in the character. And the way he talks as if directly to the reader really pulls you in like you are the girl he's speaking to and so it really gets under your skin as he escalates. Goooood stuff!
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