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Tomcurljewlery [2019-11-09 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]
more please
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Tomcurljewlery [2019-05-27 01:59:35 +0000 UTC]
needs more please
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Tomcurljewlery [2018-09-15 22:41:27 +0000 UTC]
more story
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Tomcurljewlery [2018-01-03 13:23:46 +0000 UTC]
show us ms whitney
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Tomcurljewlery [2018-01-03 13:08:37 +0000 UTC]
show their adopted parents in part 3 which i really want because story is so good
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Tomcurljewlery [2017-12-04 23:16:17 +0000 UTC]
more please
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Tomcurljewlery [2017-11-15 06:38:05 +0000 UTC]
part 3 back to school and or legal ramifications
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Tomcurljewlery [2017-08-23 20:53:32 +0000 UTC]
i want more of this
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Tomcurljewlery In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2017-08-24 02:59:37 +0000 UTC]
i just like this story and want to see how everyone adjusts emotionally
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Tomcurljewlery [2017-07-09 03:50:49 +0000 UTC]
this needs to become a seriesΒ
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Tomcurljewlery [2016-04-12 20:45:23 +0000 UTC]
more please
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C10artfan [2015-08-04 17:49:10 +0000 UTC]
I just noticed that Elaine's now wearing glasses
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C10artfan In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2015-08-05 04:52:15 +0000 UTC]
I know. it's just she wasn't wearing them before
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MetamorphOfChaos In reply to C10artfan [2015-08-05 04:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Ah. I was thinking at the time that she would wear them now that she is a little older.
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C10artfan In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2015-08-05 05:55:49 +0000 UTC]
hmm, fair enough. glasses are usually a given when you're reading and possibly sitting at a computer screen a lot
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whatideviatelike [2014-07-24 20:24:37 +0000 UTC]
I just read both stories just now and I have to say I really enjoyed the relationship you crafted between Heather and Elaine. It's very sweet and I only wish the story was longer and Mrs. Whitney was more involved in it. As Heather's jealously of her really adds a lot to this story.
Anyway it's great to see you actively making more AR. Keep up the great work!
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whatideviatelike In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2014-07-24 23:01:15 +0000 UTC]
You could very well do more with this story but at the same time this also wraps it all up pretty nicely. You could also just make a new, more expansive story with similar elements to this one in play.Β But I don't really want to dictate what you should do since this is your work after all. I'll be happy with any amount of female AR you put out.
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