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Daqueera [2018-01-19 21:26:02 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this piece! The pose is simple and relaxed, and gives such a calm vibe.

If I'm honest, the only thing I have with it is the lineart and choice of color. They seem to clash a bit in some areas (bruise, hair, etc) and the black lineart doesn't help with it. The blend for the hair is very smooth, but a bit out of place for such a solid design.

If the lines were thicker, it might work a bit better? But I think the best thing for you to do is dabble in filters and blending, or perhaps try using color schemes to get a feel of colors that work together well. But for the blending, (I use fire alpaca) try different things with the layers like burn, darken, screen, etc. You'd be surprised at what they could do!

(If you want examples, i used difference and burn for daqueera.deviantart.com/art/ET… and used screen, i think? for daqueera.deviantart.com/art/En… )

You don't have to do any of that but again, I feel color might be a thing you need to work on.

Other than that, you're golden! Your style is so distinct and pretty, it looks like something I'd see in an ACTUAL cartoon on cn or something. It just, really has a simple charm to it.

ly btw!!! good job again <33

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BrasletyGTZ [2018-01-19 07:08:23 +0000 UTC]

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the drawing is nice but you can improve a little the hands and the pose even though I liked the expression and design of the character but now I liked the drawing although the coloring is simple ... not to offend ... I only give my point of view and my most sincere opinion without the intention of offending

You have talent but you have to keep practicing and improving it to make it shine more and so everyone admires your drawings and your art but in truth I like you the way you draw...just keep drawing... good nigths and good lucking

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A-ppIes [2018-01-19 06:03:30 +0000 UTC]

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Hnng I love this its so good, the colors look really nice together and the message and pose is really cute. Here's some things I noticed though?? (its all still really good, iloveyourstyleowo)
-The shoulders are v v ery wide, like broader that swimmer shoulders
-For the style I think the soft feel would be better established if the feet's edges were rounder
-Dont be afraid to make rlly big freckles !! Try mixing small + big freckles
- Dont be afraid of bigger brows
-blend the hair gradient a little more??
- (gotta get that 100 word minimum TvT)
-maybe lower the ears further down on the head maybe??

ok i hit the minimum
overall i fucking love this n its v v cute and soft and i love your style n art and AAAAAAAAAAAA

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