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MetroXLR — King Megas Redone, Lineart
Published: 2013-05-11 20:49:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1057; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Due to comments of my previous Megas drawings looking too "young"I redid my character design of my favorite MLAATR OC.
This time, I gave him a wider chestpiece to make him more of an adult.
and, i made it a full scale image to show all his features.
Hopefully, this concept artwork is "better" than before.
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first, i would recommend work with that poll shaped waist line. it give him an hourglass figure, and that's only evident in women, no matter what cartoon medium you are in.
second, you have a weird sense of perspective. sometimes you give a sense of form, like with your waist connecting to your hips, but then you have a horribly flat image centering around the torso. your neck looks like it is coming out behind the torso, but the waist makes the torso look like it is bent forward. the same is with your fingers. they look glued on.
the thickening of the arms and torso was a good call, but the bowl-armed position makes him look taken aback. complimented by the crooked look in his eyes. it makes it look like somebody said something offensive, but not about him and he doesn't know if he should be offended by it or not.
My guess would be to remove the difference between the middle of the torso and the waist. just make a solid structure, don't thin it so much, and you'll make it a lot better. give the neck a place for it to come out of and make the torso itself less flat. bring the arms in some to make his form for structure and solid.
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O..kay, thanks for the constructive critsism.
but, in my defence.
I used This: [link] as my sole reference.
so, sorry..i'm doing my best,
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don't worry about it. you are improving a lot. i'm not that good an artist myself. I'm just incredibly observant and obsessive. i'm also an art major
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It's probably my fault, too.
THIS piece of artwork was sketched in a hurry.
and, NONE of my art pieces come out right when I am rushed.
I'm actually much better at writing
(though, i still face critisism from that as well.)
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i'm more focused on my writing as well. i dream of getting a job in cartoons or comics, writing for them
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So, your goal in life is to be a Screen/scripwriter.
nice.
sometimes people say I should write for Marvel and/or DC.
but, that's just their words, not mine.
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I would love to write for DC. that or Nicktoons or Dreamworks.
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They sure could use some Intelligent Writers.
given the "programing" that's been featured on TV, lately.
I mean..since when does CARTOON Network have Live-Action shows??
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since they made the sitcom equivalent of Walt Disney's lobotomy.
Seriously, I actually saw the movie that sparked the live action line up on CN
I want to be with Nicktoons because they've made all of my favorite cartoons come from it. though a lot also come from CN, most do come from Nick.
FOP, DP, Ginger, Thornberries, Rugrats, Jimmy Neutron, All Grown Up, etc.
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I have been working on written work of quite a few nicktoons..
and, not just the recent ones like Danny Phantom.
I actually have written fiction for Rugrats/All Grown Up (which I crossed over with X-Men)
even some lesser known toons don't escape my notice.
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X-Men Evolution was one of my favorites growing up. The original X-Men show though ended before my time.
All Grown Up was a pretty good show though imo and it sucks that they didn't keep it going.
Would you like to corroborate on something together? We might be able to make something pretty good together
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In making Story Decisions, we'd have to converse through Notes (that Yellow Notpad Icon)
Feel Free to review my Rugrats/X-Men story right now, see how it's going.
it's called "Mutant Nation"
I've got a folder for it in my gallery.
Though, I feel I must warn you..I have certain Writing Quirks.
I ALWAYS censore curse words with "*" symbols.
and, I often skip pass sex scenes when they are needed for story reasons.
Those are my rules, and I am strict with 'em.
so, let's discuss what you want discussed.
and, we'll see what happens.
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