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Erikku-Kun [2010-04-23 02:06:40 +0000 UTC]
great job love the colors
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cos22 [2009-07-14 05:58:23 +0000 UTC]
hi~ u said u wanted me to critique, so here goes~
first of all, the anatomy is kinda off, his left shoulder for one thing. It's too broad compared to his waist, er...rather it looks too extended to his left.
his bellybutton looks a bit too far to the right, making it seem like his body is twisted weirdly to his left.
But i like the face~ the eye to nose to mouth ratio looks rit, and his expression says a lot about his character.
It looks like u got the hang of laying down base colors, but u could develop it more by adding more shadows to create contrast. I see u attempted to add more shadows his lower clothing. Here a tip, instead of picking just a darker tone of the base, chose a different pallet color, like dark purple. and same for highlights, pick a pink-ish yellow shade instead of just a lighter red to give more color dynamic to the piece of clothing. and another tip, do not overuse dodge and burn cuz it lacks...well, life. U can use it for certain areas or for style but u need to learn the basics before can do those good stuff.
overall, it's common to not notice these details for a beginner so it's okay cuz u have to start somewhere to get somewhere. Just keep practicing and u'll definitely get better~ Try and do some still life cuz those r ur foundation. If u can get the hang of still life, then u can pretty much draw anything without references~
i'm sorry if i sound a bit harsh, i'm honest when it comes to critiques (and u did ask me to critique). Hope u learned something new.
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cos22 In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-07-27 23:19:38 +0000 UTC]
o yay~
glad i could help~
sure~ go ahead and add me~ u don't even need to ask 8D
if u keep drawing daily, i can gurantee u that u'll definitely show great improvement within 2 years~
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Zeraphalanx In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-08-09 04:09:52 +0000 UTC]
You are more than welcome my friend.^^
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meru90 [2009-06-23 18:45:43 +0000 UTC]
lovelyy!!
>__< nice collab
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meru90 In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-06-25 13:16:56 +0000 UTC]
youre welcome!!
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ToraKage-BlackLight [2009-06-23 00:59:00 +0000 UTC]
I love the shading!! Nice facial expression too!!
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SunriseAshes [2009-05-02 01:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Very nice =] I like it
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TiaraPixel [2009-04-30 22:29:39 +0000 UTC]
Ena pa whata sexy body *.*
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TiaraPixel In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-05-01 22:18:01 +0000 UTC]
hell no -.- I was the one that made him who he is... if it wasen't me LOL he would be Toby our jakin
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Nyanko-Yue In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-04-30 14:42:31 +0000 UTC]
Ah, jΓ‘ agora, o que Γ© Niiro?^^
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Nyanko-Yue In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-04-30 14:48:16 +0000 UTC]
Sokaaa *.*
Qual Γ© que Γ© o Metsuki e qual Γ© que Γ© o Niiro?xD
(gosh, i'm so ignorant, a ΓΊnica parte do corpo que sei dizer Γ© "mimi" x'D)
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Nyanko-Yue In reply to MetsukiNiiro [2009-04-30 16:03:30 +0000 UTC]
You're right!xD
O nome do meu manga tambΓ©m Γ© uma beca fatela se for traduzido...."Tsukiakari" nΓ£o apela a nada xD AliΓ‘s, parece plΓ‘gio niponizado da sΓ©rie "Moonlight" O.o
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