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Published: 2013-03-23 01:51:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1560; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 41
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Very pretty, though her turned leg looks like it's almost broken. It would be painful and awkward to turn her leg that drastically with the way her body is facing. And the shading makes her foot on that leg look backwards so her knee and feet don't seem to be facing the same way. Everything else is awesome though~!
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yeah, i tried to fix it and i showed it to some people to try and get critique but i apparently did not actually fully fix it. i almost didn't finish it for that reason and I do regret doing so now.
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You shouldn't regret it! It's really good aside from that leg. Changing the way the lighting hits the foot will fix that problem. I can kinda see what you were going for when I stare at it, but it's almost like an optical illusion. Take away some of the lighting near the heel of her foot. With the way the light is hitting it, that area looks like the back of her heel instead of the front of her foot since the light isn't following the curve of her foot. Maybe put a little light on the crease where her toes bend and on her two smallest toes.
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honestly, it's not really worth it. It was a pretty quick drawing anyway 6 w6;;;
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Ah, okay then~. That's fine. Just think of what I said as general advice then~.
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