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CVA123 [2009-04-02 02:33:35 +0000 UTC]

You did the veiw very well. Just make the lines smoother and that shoulder up more. Baby gotta put more back into it. I think you did well.

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WurdBendur [2009-04-01 03:42:16 +0000 UTC]

This is an awkward pose that's really hard to draw. I think her upper body is twisted in an impossible way, which makes her face and neck almost frontal, and he chest and shoulder directly from the side. But it's okay, the twist can be moved down to the waste. That seam going up her back needs to veer off at the waste and merge with the outline of her upper back. The upper part of her back should also go up a little straighter so it looks like it's viewed more from the side, in line with her chest and arm.

The curve of her ribs comes down in front of her hip, as if that part is viewed from the front. From this angle, though, the hip should be in front, so the top curve should stop where they meet, and the bottom curve should continue up, like this. I hope that makes sense.

And unless that skirt is really super tight, the outline of her cheeks probably wouldn't be visible. a suggestive line across the bottom could work, like the ones you have above, but curving upward in the middle.

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artistafrustrado [2009-04-01 01:58:55 +0000 UTC]

really sexy practise...nah her booty is big enough

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DiAmOnD-bLoOd [2009-04-01 01:32:23 +0000 UTC]

looks great, good job ^^


no... the booty looks fine I3

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