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Gemini1230 [2020-10-12 03:49:26 +0000 UTC]
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Starling5 [2020-06-04 11:57:28 +0000 UTC]
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Nautilus18 [2018-12-24 09:06:11 +0000 UTC]
You know what would make this story perfect
'Flash foward to an old, lonely, decrepit Lightning Dust in a retirement home edging closer to the last pudding cup on her walker only for her to it to be swiped at the last second.'
Lightning:"Damn it, I will show them I am still the faste'leg on walker breaks' Shit!"
Skychaser would be peering in watching and enjoying the hell out of it while waving a ticket to Summer's show through the window as the orderlies coral Lightning before she busts another hip.
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ShaleZookeeper7 [2018-12-14 01:19:57 +0000 UTC]
That was a sweet scene between Summer and Venture !
Also...Lightning Dust taking Sky's ticket...why does the reasons for that not surprise me ?
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Songal [2018-12-10 05:01:11 +0000 UTC]
This is such a great moment for these two, I'm grateful you made it as a transition between the story arcs
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MiaMaha In reply to Songal [2018-12-15 05:25:27 +0000 UTC]
HEH, thank you! I thought it'd be a good way to start showing parallels between the two arcs. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Songal In reply to MiaMaha [2018-12-15 06:26:45 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
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julianwilbury [2018-12-08 18:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Lightning Dust stole Sky's ticket basically to drive Sky and Summer apart? I know that's technically not the worse thing she's done, but there's something about just how much planning and manipulation she put into controlling Summer's perception of Sky that really just sickens me.
Also yeah longtime reader first time commenter, I REAAALLY hope you don't lose your steam on your pony stuff before the truth about Lightning is finally out, because I really NEED that catharsis at this point.
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MiaMaha In reply to julianwilbury [2018-12-11 03:44:13 +0000 UTC]
Ahh yes, I'm glad someone's noting the amount of effort Lightning put into altering Summer's perception! It definitely is supposed to really show what kind of pony she is, and just how much she held against Skychaser.
Also hello~! I'm always happy to see a new commenter, whether they're a new reader or a longtime one!!
I'm pretty determined to keep this story going as long as I possibly can, but if there does come a time where I truly, genuinely just can't continue this story (really not planning on letting myself just drop it or let myself think like that, but I know anything is possible), one thing I absolutely will make sure I do is finish the Dust family arc. I have plans that I feel very passionate about regarding that climax, and if all other story arcs fail, THEIR arc is one that I want to share. Until then, I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story!
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InkedEspeon [2018-12-08 15:44:52 +0000 UTC]
Summer, the reason why he was acting like this is because your mother treated him horrible
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MiaMaha In reply to InkedEspeon [2018-12-15 05:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Not that she knows the extent of it 👍: 1 ⏩: 1
Camadude [2018-12-08 15:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooooo I kinda ship it if the age gap isn't too much *u*
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MiaMaha In reply to Camadude [2018-12-08 18:06:15 +0000 UTC]
mmmMMMNOPE Ven is 12 here and Summer is 21 ahaha so not a thing to ship
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Camadude In reply to MiaMaha [2018-12-08 19:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, gotcha xD
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MiaMaha In reply to tehwatcher [2018-12-15 05:14:07 +0000 UTC]
HEH, they both need hugs...👍: 1 ⏩: 0
TheDarkPhoenixQueen [2018-12-08 04:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God, I love it!!! I just adore your diverse characters here. They are so cool!
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Annabear1211 [2018-12-08 02:57:41 +0000 UTC]
AAWWWWW this is super adorable and it’s an amazing picture
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Skywiz [2018-12-08 02:36:02 +0000 UTC]
DA's system is set up so that you can have 4 thumbnails in one description to help prevent spam, if you want more thumbnails to work than that, you can either use the html command img src="Your link here" height="whatever height in px you want" Width="Whatever width you want"> to put them in beyond the 4. you'll also need the opening < which I omitted so that it didn't try to turn it into an image.
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MiaMaha In reply to Skywiz [2018-12-08 02:38:30 +0000 UTC]
OH! Well dang, I did see a mention of a thumbnail limit but never realized that was what was causing the "malfunctioning" character thumbnails 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Skywiz In reply to MiaMaha [2018-12-08 02:40:08 +0000 UTC]
>w) no problem. Glad to help. There's always a way around it if you know how to speak'ah the computer's language though.
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