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SulaimanDoodle [2016-08-04 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]
Super adorable, love the shine In pikachu's eyes, the shading is top notch! All around fantastic.
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SaphireDragon16 [2016-08-04 17:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Made me think of Death Note, and now I am imagining Pikachu in Ryuk cosplay, awe. x3
The colouring on the apple looks amazing, with the dark shading along the bottom of the apple and the lighting and varied colouring across the top you have given it a good amount of depth and realism combined with the lighting. That looks amazing but I think some darker shading on the apple just below Pikachu's body would help add more depth to the drawing.
I love the dark shadows and black orbs in the background, I think this worked really well to make Pikachu stand out more, because I personally love dark background and borders, I can't help but think some more the black shadowing in the drawing would fill in some of the white space, and might look especially around the paler shadow below the Pikachu and the apple. I how you coloured that part gray and not solid black, as it helps makes the black parts in the drawing stand out even more.
Pikachu itself looks pretty good, I feel something is off with the eyes but you've already mentioned that (and I know the pain when you make a mistake in ink Dx), so besides that I really like the lighting and shading across his body, nicely done. The only other part of the drawing I would criticise is the gray shadow, maybe the darker gray shadows closer to Pikachu's body should be larger to add more depth to the drawing?
Interesting how realistic the apple looks in comparison to Pikachu, reminds me of Pokemon Go...even though I haven't gotten the game yet. Dx
Hope my opinion can be of some help.
~critique by Inspiring Creation group
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mich-spich In reply to SaphireDragon16 [2016-11-12 21:42:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh man, you must have been really unlucky for that to happen especially since it was due soon. If I was in your situation I would have probably thrown it out lol.
I can not resend my note for some reason, is it because I do it through my phone? :/ I will seriously loose my marbles I'd I have to write that 3 paragraph responded for the fifth time. XD 😭
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CameronEXO [2016-08-03 20:22:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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CameronEXO In reply to mich-spich [2016-08-05 12:59:48 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
Awww kitty face ^^
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mich-spich In reply to CameronEXO [2016-08-07 10:48:17 +0000 UTC]
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ZiskaJa [2016-08-03 12:29:04 +0000 UTC]
This is a really cute drawing!
Can you tell me what kind of coloured pencils you used?
Pikachu himself is very well done! I especially like how you simplified the apple into a comic style. The tetures for the light reflection look really great!
The only minor point of critisism, that I have, is that in certain areas, I think that, eventhough this a comic (and therefore not realistic), some areas would need stronger shadows. Especially the area on the body, where the apple casts a shadow would have to be much darker in my opinion.
Other than that, I think this is a really cool, and especially cute drawing! Great job on this.
Critique for Inspiring Creation.
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mich-spich In reply to ZiskaJa [2016-08-05 10:38:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I used crayola pencils for this. XD
Yes, I agree with adding stronger shadows to Pikachu since the apple is close to him.
Thanks for the critique. :3
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