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Michiru-sun β€” story to tell
Published: 2006-04-30 22:43:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 464; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 12
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Description Little butterfly
Sing me a song
Take away my sins and all my wrongs
Little butterfly
Sing me a Gershwin tune
You know its true

Butterfly, Butterfly
Be here soon
Come and sing my favorite tune
You know me oh so well
Have you got something to tell?
Dig deeper into the well

Butterfly, little butterfly
Dig up my bones
Underneath the archaic stones
Dig deeper and deeper into the well
You will find a story to tell

I saw him one day
He made it wrong
I made a mistake
That cost me my life
He took out a gun
Towards my head
Did you hear the deafening blow?

Butterfly , butterfly
Dig out my bones
Underneath the old, old stones
Its been so long
Since I saw his face

That’s my story to tell
I hope you have heard it well

Underneath all these stones
Are hidden my empty hollow bones

Little butterfly
Sing me a song
Take away my sins and all my wrongs
Little butterfly
Sing me a Gershwin tune
You know its true
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Comments: 19

xvampiricxspiritx [2006-06-11 02:49:14 +0000 UTC]

nice michelle...yexx its a compliment so dont go OMG on me

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Michiru-sun In reply to xvampiricxspiritx [2006-06-11 02:59:56 +0000 UTC]

lol

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punksheila [2006-06-05 23:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Well it's nice to see something longer than the others lol. I really like this, it's shows the beauty of life and death at once.

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Michiru-sun In reply to punksheila [2006-06-06 04:26:42 +0000 UTC]

ah thanks

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AngelusNoir [2006-05-09 02:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh!*emo tear*...my heart was dancing with the pretty butterfly, & ...blam!!!The shock!!..Much more dramatic than I was expecting really!...Very well done, with a surprise dramatic twist, like a Grimm's faerie tale!

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Michiru-sun In reply to AngelusNoir [2006-05-09 03:13:42 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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casmir [2006-05-07 01:00:36 +0000 UTC]

very cute, morbib poem!!! Love how you are telling the butterfly!

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Michiru-sun In reply to casmir [2006-05-07 01:18:09 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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casmir In reply to Michiru-sun [2006-05-07 01:29:53 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure, it was a very awesome poem!

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Michiru-sun In reply to casmir [2006-05-07 01:32:45 +0000 UTC]

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casmir In reply to Michiru-sun [2006-05-07 01:34:49 +0000 UTC]

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BloodSnow [2006-05-01 01:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Very cute with the butterfly

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Michiru-sun In reply to BloodSnow [2006-05-02 03:12:45 +0000 UTC]

thanx.,....thats wat i was going for

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XxLucifersXBridexX [2006-05-01 00:56:57 +0000 UTC]

omg i think it's beautiful..i lvoe the story line and how you are telling the story by telling the butterfly what happened....wow awesome job, keep it up
jane

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Michiru-sun In reply to XxLucifersXBridexX [2006-05-02 03:13:16 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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XxLucifersXBridexX In reply to Michiru-sun [2006-05-02 19:34:39 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome
jane

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gothkittykat [2006-04-30 22:57:12 +0000 UTC]

This is great,good job!

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Michiru-sun In reply to gothkittykat [2006-04-30 22:59:00 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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gothkittykat In reply to Michiru-sun [2006-04-30 23:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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