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Midnight-Dark-Angel — AkuNo - Pool Game

Published: 2008-09-28 19:22:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1909; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 47
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Description Once again, I've coloured ~Nijuuni 's lineart. Please to enjoy.

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Small idea of a story that popped into my head:

I couldn't help but watch as he strugged with his game of pool, was he just warming up for a game that would come later? Or was he just learning? I guessed he was learning, especially because so many times he looked confused as to what he was doing.

I walked over and asked him who he was. "I'm Axel." He replied, his spiky red hair was a couple shades brighter than my own, his emerald green eyes drew me in.

"And I'm Reno. I've been watching you do this. Do you have any idea what you're doing?" I said, getting a little closer.

"Not really. Think you could help me?"

"Sure. Why not? I'm pretty good at pool, yo." I got behind him, placing my right hand on his hip, and my left hand over his. I gave him a quirky smile, and began my lesson.
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Comments: 6

amu162 [2012-02-04 01:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Just fangirled all over my house.... xD

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aoifasd [2008-10-06 16:37:20 +0000 UTC]

i jsut hope Axel wont get hit on the head by reno......
seeing on how Reno jsu tdoenst have spacial awareness skills.... ROTFL

i pity rude for this.

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Nijuuni [2008-09-30 01:30:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for coloring! i really like how you added some mist into it too 8D gives off more of a smokey-sensual bar/pool hall now XDD! nice touch of texture to the pool table too 8) i really adore the shades in their hair right now XD very well done.

i think axel's face should be more shaded on the left (his left). the large shade around his nose, and the lack there of around his left cheek makes his face look flat. try to round it out like you did with his forehead, just to give him a lil more flesh XD

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Midnight-Dark-Angel In reply to Nijuuni [2008-09-30 03:57:25 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome. I guess I achieved what I wanted, 'cause it wouldn't say bar/pool hall to me with out the smoke, and the lighting tint I gave it.

I shall keep that in mind, I just noticed that with the left side of his face... it does look a little flat. Thanks for the tip.

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anthony-art [2008-09-29 16:57:25 +0000 UTC]

ly

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SummingUpTheStars [2008-09-28 21:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done! ^^

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