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Published: 2010-07-22 13:29:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 282; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 3
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memories


I remember the first time I saw you.
Sad...that's how you looked.
I couldn't let you go on like that ....
Lending a hand ..I helped pick you up..
Giving you the confidence you needed to go on ..

Step by step holding your hand , we made it
Made it through the darkness ,
Coming out with more than friendship.

Coming out with a deep love ..a great love...
able to withstand anything that came our way.....
But then you had to leave....leave to a place far away ......
waiting for me you said. With your last breath you promised ,
and then i had to let you go. My heart broke..into a million pieces
and so many memories filled my mind...
The way you held my hand ....
the way your breath tickled my neck ...
the intensity of your kisses .....
the smell of your skin......


Now you're gone and
and all i have left are your memories ....
Memories we made together out of love and friendship
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Comments: 14

Emberpelt [2010-08-27 04:16:41 +0000 UTC]

This poem was incredibly moving. It flows as naturally as speech, yet has an undeniable poetic quality that makes it stand out. Your creative use of punctuation adds impact and directs the reader to the perfect voice and tone. In short: I love it!

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midnightdream2 In reply to Emberpelt [2010-10-03 01:54:11 +0000 UTC]

hanks alot

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Hotsteaky [2010-07-26 16:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, I enjoyed reading this.

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midnightdream2 In reply to Hotsteaky [2010-07-28 15:24:36 +0000 UTC]

[link] just thought youd like to read this also

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midnightdream2 In reply to Hotsteaky [2010-07-28 15:22:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks dear

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Sofia4ever [2010-07-22 13:52:45 +0000 UTC]

it's so... beautiful...

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midnightdream2 In reply to Sofia4ever [2010-07-22 14:00:50 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwww thanks ..i hope i make it ..hehe

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Sofia4ever In reply to midnightdream2 [2010-07-22 14:33:17 +0000 UTC]

i really hope you win!

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midnightdream2 In reply to Sofia4ever [2010-07-22 14:35:00 +0000 UTC]

haha awww ..but i kinda doubt that

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Sofia4ever In reply to midnightdream2 [2010-07-22 14:54:29 +0000 UTC]

aww but it's really beautiful!

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midnightdream2 In reply to Sofia4ever [2010-07-22 15:06:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks there i appreciate that

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Sofia4ever In reply to midnightdream2 [2010-07-22 15:34:06 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Makaasio [2010-07-22 13:45:51 +0000 UTC]

you are a really good writer ;3

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midnightdream2 In reply to Makaasio [2010-07-22 14:00:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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