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Published: 2014-06-25 05:19:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 586; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 2
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Description     "Cheers for justice!", said a man at the side of me. I stared at my glass, thinking what justice was even in this planet. I knew very well the pain and the economy crisis around the world. Drinking beer was even a sin for me. I only drank socially, but even drinking felt unjustified. I stared at the beer in the glass. I gently placed the cup down. I have been mistaken for a 19 year old many times. And this was just one of does times. Luckily, I could sneak into private bars. I gazed at the bachelor. "May I have water?", I asked, I had to force my voice to sound deep even though I knew well how soft my actual voice was. The bachelor took the glass of beer, cleanse it, and gave me a new cup with water. I drank it. Once again I could not help to think of the people out there. Sure, I was a hero, no one in this bar knew I was the hero everyone was talking about in news, but I didn't felt the least happy of it. I could only think if I was really helping people or if I was helping 0% of it. I closed my eyes. I could easily smell alcohol and bad breathe coming from the men sitting around me. Disgusting was the only word. They were all laughing at the women who pole danced. In my opinion, they were merely staining women's dignities. But what can I say?, they probably did it for a reason. Maybe a good reason, maybe a bad one. It was no place of mine to watch. I turned around and saw the women dancing. I looked at the men who were restricted from touching them. The eyes of those men.. they were all filled with lust. That enough disgusted me to be in a bar. Specially, a bar that was meant for adults. I felt someone pat my shoulder while he was laughing. "See that women, youngster?", the man asked. Obviously he was drunk as hell. I followed his finger and noticed a ginger haired female. She was beautiful. But what came out of the man's mouth was awful. "I would give her a piece of my wood!", the man laughed loudly, wrapping his arm around my shoulder as if we're best buddies. He continued drinking in a messy matter. Half the beer in his mouth, and half the other was fed to his clothes. I closed my eyes, and could only think of 4 words....This world is horrible. 

Hope you like the story and the new ID! xD
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Comments: 15

Nightmarewolf365 [2014-07-13 18:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Mind if i make a story out of this as well??? 
Remember my old one i made???? 

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MMDMiku24 [2014-06-29 01:14:17 +0000 UTC]

ENJOY YOUR TIME THERE WHILE YOU STILL CAN!

I-I mean... Why are you there in the first place....? e - o.
Damned teenagers...

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Ask-Bella-Drowned [2014-06-25 20:25:57 +0000 UTC]

"I closed my eyes, and could only think of 4 words.... this world is horrible."

That line, is perfect.

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MMDTeto13 [2014-06-25 19:54:09 +0000 UTC]

WHY ARE YOU AT A STRIP BAR ANYWAY?! XD!?

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MikaelBratLoni In reply to MMDTeto13 [2014-06-25 20:00:40 +0000 UTC]

COINCIDENCE!!!(not)
trololololololol

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R4lNB0W [2014-06-25 18:21:48 +0000 UTC]

man you really improved from the beginning bby
i luv the story btw and da picture
very hero
such man
much Awesome
wow...... eew drunk men.. i would smack them X3

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Abygailz-Magicz [2014-06-25 15:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is absolutely awesome, the story and everything. I could even picture it a sort of lumber-jack looking guy with a beard and a personality all gruff and under-mannered. And Mikeal a person, who see's the human's and there ways. 

It was really awesome. Also this is, BlueberryMuffinCult. I first thought that the guy said " I would give her a piece of my willy." 

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Stupid-Fernan [2014-06-25 05:31:53 +0000 UTC]

That story is real? 

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CuriousCat-13 [2014-06-25 05:29:43 +0000 UTC]

This world truly is a horrible mess.....with everything that occurs every second, and many of these preventable events aren't stopped....but it makes one wonder, is the world today is better than it was in the past.....

I really like the new ID and the story though, it really makes you think about things.

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MMDTeto13 In reply to CuriousCat-13 [2014-06-25 19:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Slavery? e.e

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CuriousCat-13 In reply to MMDTeto13 [2014-06-27 02:53:01 +0000 UTC]

......don't even start there.....okay? I'm getting tired of hearing that.....it's in the past and we've learned a lesson from that.....I know you're trying to bring up a point (and it's a damn good one), but I really don't want to start a huge discussion on that.....not to mention that I'm very ashamed of what the people before me have done during that time. It's not something that should've occurred in the first place.

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MMDTeto13 In reply to CuriousCat-13 [2014-06-29 05:47:40 +0000 UTC]

XD Dunno worry, I was only joking! I would never cause a fight... I would never start a fight anyway! 

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CuriousCat-13 In reply to MMDTeto13 [2014-06-30 00:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Good

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AskTotalDramaElanora [2014-06-25 05:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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MJRoxMyRhinestoneSox [2014-06-25 05:23:09 +0000 UTC]

oh mai   

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