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MikinoNova — Jelly Escape
Published: 2009-11-03 23:10:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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so here is my Escape illustration, i'm uploading so a friend can give me some suggestions.XD=]=0<:
i want to add fish and stuff to make it look like they are underwater more.
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My cute! You are too cute! Mice are cute! That is as constructive as I give my criticism.
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I think it needs more bubbles in the second panel.
And the fourth panel, I think it may be stronger if one the mermaids was closer to the viewer.
And pete noticed the face size isnt consistent.
Hehe but its soo cute I love it .
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ohhhhh the face size of the jelly or of the mermaids?
thanks for the suggestions =]
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Oops of the jelly! And yw!~
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Wow, I never would've thought of this in a million years. Great work. Not in color?
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maybe i'll do color later, but it was a black and white assignment
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awwwwwwwww... stupid black and white...
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Mooooore BUBBLES! XD
The 1st panel the mermaids eyes look a bit crooked. u can also try adding in rays of light in the background
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oh yea good stuff Mommy!
thanks =]
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no problem honey. Keep up the good work, your father and I are very proud of you X3
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Stop beating me to posting, dammit!
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i like it, broseph!!!
...also thanks for reminding me to do mine. 8D
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thanks!
ohhh i hope you have it started =]
meow~
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