symbolisms [2019-11-29 19:02:06 +0000 UTC]

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RuinDarkdweller [2019-06-25 21:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely Stunning!

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xRizzoLazarusx [2019-03-17 09:52:32 +0000 UTC]

This right here, so many different meaning can come out of this. OMG I LOVE IT!!!

When I read something like this and it hits me and says, "Gotcha".....

I have to become a watcher!!!

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Lugia20711 [2017-04-17 04:11:53 +0000 UTC]

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StunStorm [2016-09-06 03:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Powerful! 

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konansilver [2016-01-03 17:00:15 +0000 UTC]

I understand

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unaveragejo3 [2015-06-19 04:47:40 +0000 UTC]

I love the concept that you can be everything yet nothing because being a person is all that all us little humans with our small minds really care about.

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Mallowny [2015-05-06 14:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Simple words, simple rhymes, yet  so brilliantly written all together. I simply love it

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IMAFTF [2014-10-19 10:11:39 +0000 UTC]

This poem seems to have so much more meaning to it then what I already see in it. 

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kokikoki456 [2014-02-26 23:29:54 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful.....

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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty [2014-01-23 20:42:19 +0000 UTC]

this inspired me to write like 3 poems, im posting them but linking yours since your's is waaaayyyy better. so yea, thought i'd tell ya. think im technically supposed to anyway. well, thanks for another inspirational poem. ^-^

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TempestasRex [2013-10-21 03:50:35 +0000 UTC]

When I read this it makes me think of God, and also makes me feel a little sad for him.

I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.

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pctomgirl [2013-08-04 02:25:50 +0000 UTC]

I applaud you...good job

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Gwenvar [2013-07-27 17:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Very good and dynamic. But I think the 3rd line breaks the flow: it would be better if the 3rd and 4th lines would be swapped (considering the flow, but for the writing to make sense maybe not XD).

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HetaliaLover379 [2013-07-26 10:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I love this! Well done!  

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taangfioleegirl [2013-07-08 16:09:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this but please be my friend

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UnderHisWing [2013-07-04 21:33:39 +0000 UTC]

I love this!!!

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sumarlegur [2013-07-04 15:07:32 +0000 UTC]

awful.

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prokopsm [2013-07-04 01:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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RandomRadish7 [2013-07-01 22:14:23 +0000 UTC]

This is just so beautiful!!! Don't think you're weird for making this it's amazing! I love it! (Sorry, now I'm being weird ) Everyone is equal, but we're all different. It's called personality. No one's exactly alike. But yet if you know someone, you might not really know them truly. Though we may seem important and big, there's billions of others in the world so we're probably not as huge as we think.

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LalalandMuse [2013-06-30 10:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow....This is so true. It's funny how in a world of billions, we all manage to be unique.

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MADmarks [2013-06-22 23:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Truth lies in paradox.

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lightbleueyes [2013-06-21 15:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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CAPTAIN-CHETO [2013-06-21 05:30:28 +0000 UTC]

I am the comment, and I am the favourites

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foreverforum [2013-06-20 09:40:58 +0000 UTC]

I AM THE TABLE!!!

— James Hetfield

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StevenCojo [2013-06-19 08:39:23 +0000 UTC]

I guess by just picking words and putting them in antithesis in a sort of symmetry is poetry nowadays...well, anyways, congrats for the simplicity, it reminds me of the ones my little sister used make...

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IceCrystall [2013-06-18 22:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Love
It

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Skutchi [2013-06-18 16:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Does that make sense, I can't really get it..

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JustinJPS [2013-06-18 03:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a good description of god there

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SeiRyuSeijin [2013-06-12 03:58:25 +0000 UTC]

You stumped my AP English teacher, so kudos to you![link]

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samuelquenton [2013-06-11 00:03:20 +0000 UTC]

that is fun to read

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JackCaliber [2013-06-09 22:57:42 +0000 UTC]

I am BATMAN! >

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moonlightshines9467 [2013-06-09 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one! I don't really have any other words for it, but...it's really good

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xtinyheartx [2013-06-08 21:56:45 +0000 UTC]

whoa sounds like a riddle or something!! really cool!

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Kakaider [2013-06-08 10:06:00 +0000 UTC]

its a wonderful work but sad here read this if you would v.v
[link]

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marchesme [2013-06-07 19:06:12 +0000 UTC]

So simple, yet so true and powerful...

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SuicideParker [2013-06-07 18:01:59 +0000 UTC]

The story of my life.

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liznixXbakura [2013-06-07 18:00:54 +0000 UTC]

O_O this is brilliant.

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syforceHUn [2013-06-07 17:14:59 +0000 UTC]

WOW this is so beautyful, i just tried to translate it,
as a mirror translation

'Én vagyok az árnyék, és én vagyok a fény
Én vagyok a napfény, és én vagyok az éj
Én vagyok a csata, és én vagyok a harcos
Én vagyok a víz, és én vagyok a Tűz
Én egy vízcsepp vagyok csak aki kész, hogy lezuhanjon
Én vagyok a világ, és mégis...
A világon senki.'

And my rhyme translation:

'Árny vagyok, s egyben fény
Napsugár és este vagyok én
Harc vagyok, s annak Bújtója
Én vagyok a víz, s a tűz gyújtója
Vízcsepp vagyok csupán, ki kész leesni
Én vagyok a világ, de mégis...
Az ég világon senki.'

I love your work =3 I hope You like my translation too

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Riyria-girl [2013-06-07 15:48:28 +0000 UTC]

LOVE THIS FOREVER! its is everything anyone could feel, yet very personal in many ways!

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imimad [2013-06-07 15:10:32 +0000 UTC]

me like it !! u r si good girl you should write more

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Spiiiidy [2013-06-07 10:30:38 +0000 UTC]

That's .... very deep. Thanks.

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LanaT35 [2013-06-07 02:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Makes me sad, but that's cause I don't understand the last line, pretty awesome though. You make me wish writing poetry.

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AnaInTheStars [2013-06-07 01:13:31 +0000 UTC]

wow, love the ending...very cool. Short and sweet

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SmileAtYourOwnRisk [2013-06-06 19:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Damn. I really like this one. Nice work!

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just-for-giggles [2013-06-06 19:29:28 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful, I love it. it's very meaningful(:

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AkiLover93 [2013-06-06 19:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I like this. Very good and suprising ending

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Cherry-Chipmunk59 [2013-06-06 17:38:26 +0000 UTC]

why are poems called "I AM" so damn cool?

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Jelakennedy [2013-06-06 17:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Battle and fighter. Favorite part. Great poem.

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