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You can see the full project here: www.behance.net/gallery/Sketch…Design Calligraphy Sketchbook vol.1
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Hi, first of all - thanks for sharing!
For a draft version, it´s quite nice.
Good are the following points:
- nicely design letter "D"
- really nice ink (which one is it?)
To improve your skills:
- try to not duplicate lines to many times (because it might look blurry a little bit)
- try to avoid "flying" letters which are bigger or smaller then the rest
- improve your letter "s"
- the horizontal line in the letter "e" is to thick
- the flourishing on the right side decreases the ablitiy to read the word (it´s a little bit to close to the other letters).
Is this feedback/critique helpful for you or do you need further details?
Thanks and all the best!
9PI
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This is a nice piece of Atrwork
I can pretty much follow my former crittiquer.
But I like to point out the nice design of the "e"
What I'd like to crittique is, that the letters "i" "g" and "n" stick a bit together, wich makes it hard to read in my oppinion.
But as a whole I think it's an impressive artpiece and I'm trying to get to this leven of skill
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Beatiful shade of blue! Calligraphy is really cool!
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So Amazing. I love how you wrote the word..did i so how amazing that is?
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