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MilGoncalez In reply to Shir0gane [2010-09-26 07:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! He's killing his girfriend's father!

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Shir0gane In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-09-27 03:12:43 +0000 UTC]

oO wow!
no wonder he looks so agitated...
now I'm getting really interested in this guy and his story :3

I also have an OC who kills his own father at the age of 14. in his rage he beats him to death with a steel pipe...

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MilGoncalez In reply to Shir0gane [2010-09-27 03:35:00 +0000 UTC]

OMGosh, hahahaha! Well, Victor actually loves his father to death, and he's actually killing the guy because he killed his father...but he loves the girlfriend too so that may be a problem! I always planned on submitting the whole story and all the characters here, and thanks to your lovely comment I might actually do that someday! I'm also really interested on your guy!! Do you have his story or art somewhere? Thanks by the way

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Shir0gane In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-09-28 03:04:50 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome :3
and I'd really like to know more about Victor. from the first time I saw him I thought he was awesome. but knowing he shoots his girlfriend's father makes me more and more curious.
what happend between both fathers? how did Victor react when he found out it was his girlfriend's father that killed his own? was she already his girlfriend? will she hate him when she discovers who killed her father? ...

thanks for being interested in my guy. :3
his name is Asagi Ryouma (everyone calls him Asagi because he hates his first name Ryouma).
but unfortunately there doesn't exist any art of him yet. I created his background and the world the story takes place a few years ago. but I never came to write it (except for a few pages of the first chapter). and because I'm german I'm only good at my native language ^^'
the part where Asagi kills his father is in the past though. he is a grown up when the story begins. I only created this to draw his badass personality and so it can be revealed through the storyline. the story itself deals with biogenetic experiments, high-level conspiracy and apocalyptic elements in a near future japan.
hopefully I get my illustrator to draw Asagi someday ^^'

but he resembles my actual OC Suzuki -> [link]
(Asagi would have shorter hair and a less gloomy and dark appearance )

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MilGoncalez In reply to Shir0gane [2010-09-28 04:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, this sounds veeeeery interesting! And I get what you mean, I'm Brazilian and my story is also written in my first language (Portuguese...). Good luck with your character's development anyway!! I loved the pic, he looks very badass!

About the shooting parents problem...man, the tragedy in the character's story is suppose to happen at the end.I still don't know how she'll react to this, though...maybe I'll keep her father (barely) alive..? Anyway, I'm so glad you like him! I started to think about him when I was 14 years old or something,and finally I decided to show him to the world!

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Shir0gane In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-09-29 00:25:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you decided to share this OC of yours. and now the other two too. I was very curious of Victors girlfriend, because I wondered what kind of woman were able to catch his heart. but I think that pic with their first encounter explains everything soooo cute!
but I think it would be more dramatic to let Juliana's father die. it's more exciting to see how the characters deal with the situation (just my opinion ^^' )

and I'm very flatterd you liked my Suzuki :3
yeah, he is a real badass! but he has his tender aspects too. in fact he is only acting that cold because he is afraid of getting hurt.

but I know that you mean. I started my story Tokyo Onmyouji about 6 years ago. Suzuki became the great love of my life and though I'm stuck in a big writers block I cannot give this up till its finished.

if you're interested there is a pic of epic awesomeness of both my main chars -> [link]
Suzuki on the right, Hiromasa on the left

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MilGoncalez In reply to Shir0gane [2010-09-29 01:28:23 +0000 UTC]

You're right, he'll die for sure!! Dear God, we're so mean..!
She's his childhood sweetheart, and that's probably the main reason why she got a free pass into his heart- they met before life started to suck~

And this is such a kick ass picture!! I'm in love with the characters,please don't give up on them!! I'll actually fave this one!
Your Suzuki is definitely a very interesting character; problematic, twisted,with such a terrible past that makes him so lovable. It really takes years to mature and finish the whole concept of such complex characters, right?

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Wiggum42 In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-10-08 20:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Dude, you seriously have to finish that story and submit it. With this artwork. I barely know anything at all and I'm already interested in it.

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MilGoncalez In reply to Wiggum42 [2010-10-08 21:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, I wish I could, but it's written in portuguese (my native language). I plan to finish it and turn everything into a comic, and then of course I would submit it here
For now you guys are just gonna have to handle my random characters and informations, haha.
Thank you so much, I'm flattered

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Wiggum42 In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-10-08 21:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh my yes a comic would be absolutely perfect. I really hope you get around to doing that sometime! I'd love to read it.

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MilGoncalez In reply to Wiggum42 [2010-10-08 23:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you That's really encouraging ^^

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Shir0gane In reply to MilGoncalez [2010-09-29 04:53:24 +0000 UTC]

hehe, we're not mean that's the good thing - they are fiction, your characters. and you can do with them what ever you want.

they are childhood sweethearts... lucky bastards!!

and I'm so flattered that you like my charas and this pic. it's my most beloved of HakkyouHime's works for TO so far. I'm very happy I could get her to draw for me. her style is just perfect to visualize my story though I'm afraid I disappoint her a little with my writers block ^^'

but I will definitely not give up on this!! not after 6 years, 17 chapters and 650 written A4 pages.
and you're right. it really takes a long time to develop complex characters and a deep storyline. this all started when I discovered my fascination for shounen-ai (boylove) with a simple idea of a teacher-student relationship. but as I thought about the characters and their background the whole thing grew more and more into an epic legend. actually I'm planning also a prequel (showing Suzuki's past) and a sequel (concluding the whole story). and I wanna try and publish it. if everything goes well I hopefully will be translated into english and japanese. my big dream is to see Tokyo Onmyouji made into an anime *reaches for stars* ^^'

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